Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Votre réponse est claire et pertinente, mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en évitant la répétition de l'objectif professionnel. Essayez de formuler la réponse de manière plus naturelle et concise.

Exemplo: I am currently studying management at Neoma Business School in Rouen because I aim to work for a global company in the future.

Sugestão: Faites attention à la prononciation et à la clarté des mots (par exemple, 'dying' au lieu de 'living' et 'Norma' au lieu de 'Neoma'). Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

Exemplo: I live in Rouen and study at Neoma Business School, which offers a great environment to develop transferable skills like adaptability and communication.

Sugestão: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et des mots mal utilisés ('necessity' au lieu de 'nationalities'). Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus simples et correctes, et ajoutez des mots de liaison pour la cohérence.

Exemplo: Yes, it's a great place to study because the students are friendly and there are many international students, which allows us to share different points of view.

Sugestão: La réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire suivie d'une explication, en utilisant des mots de liaison appropriés.

Exemplo: I would like the school to organize more events because currently, there are not enough opportunities to meet and talk with students from different programs.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais pourrait être améliorée en corrigeant la grammaire et en rendant la phrase plus fluide. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour mieux connecter vos idées.

Exemplo: I don't have very clear plans yet, but I hope to study in Ireland because I want to work for a global company, which will also help me support my family financially.

× I am currently still dying in Rouen at Norma Business School.

✓ I am currently still studying in Rouen at Neoma Business School.

The word 'dying' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'studying' to indicate attending school. Also, the school name was misspelled as 'Norma' instead of 'Neoma'. This is a vocabulary and spelling error rather than a grammar tense issue, but correcting the verb to the present continuous 'am studying' fits the present tense context.

× there are a lot of necessity and of international students

✓ there are a lot of necessities and international students

The word 'necessity' is a countable noun here and should be pluralized to 'necessities' to match 'a lot of'. Also, the phrase 'of international students' should not have 'of' after 'and'. Correct quantifier usage requires plural nouns when preceded by 'a lot of'.

× it's really a great place to exchange different point of view

✓ it's really a great place to exchange different points of view

The phrase 'point of view' should be pluralized to 'points of view' because 'different' implies multiple perspectives. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I would like the place for us today to make some change in the about the events in school

✓ I would like the place where we study to make some changes about the events at school

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('for us today', 'in the about'). The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical structure by properly ordering phrases and using 'changes' plural to match 'some'.

× there are not enough events in order to speak with different students in different programs

✓ there are not enough events to speak with different students from different programs

The phrase 'in order to' is unnecessarily formal and can be simplified to 'to'. Also, 'in different programs' should be 'from different programs' to correctly indicate students belonging to various programs.

× I don't have a very clear plans yet

✓ I don't have very clear plans yet

The phrase 'a very clear plans' is incorrect because 'plans' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.