Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question with a topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, try to make your response slightly more natural by combining the sentences smoothly and adding a bit more information about your studies.

Exemplo: I am currently a university student majoring in music, which I find both challenging and rewarding.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I usually study in a café because I enjoy studying there while having a drink; it helps me stay focused.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but includes filler words and could be more concise. To improve, avoid fillers like 'uh' and 'umm', and provide a more specific reason why the café is comfortable for you.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the atmosphere is relaxed, which helps me concentrate better.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and provides specific details with examples. To improve, you could use linking words to enhance coherence and vary your vocabulary slightly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like some changes to the study environment; for instance, adding more quiet zones and comfortable seating areas would significantly help students concentrate better.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and detailed. To improve, avoid the phrase 'studying music hard' and instead describe your efforts more naturally, adding linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: In the future, I hope to become a music teacher, so I have been dedicating a lot of time and effort to studying music thoroughly.

× I usually study in the cafe because I like study.

✓ I usually study in the cafe because I like studying.

The verb 'like' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'study' should be changed to 'studying' to be grammatically correct.

× I like study while drinking.

✓ I like studying while drinking.

Similar to the previous sentence, after 'like' the verb should be in the gerund form. 'Study' should be 'studying' to correctly express the activity enjoyed.