Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
I'm a student and I study a great 11.
Examinador
Where do you study?
Candidato
I'm study at high school and now I'm planning to prepare for university entrance exams.
Examinador
Is it a good place to study?
Candidato
Of course, in my school my teachers can answers all my curious about this subject on I can. Teach my friends too.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Candidato
To be honest, I think my school is quite nice at the moment. However, I believe it would be beneficial if the school could expand and adding new buildings to accommodate more students and provide better facilities.
Examinador
What are your future study plans?
Candidato
I guess not only me but also young people, they will have a plan for the future and my futures. Thought the blends aren't improved. My 4 skill in I'll test because at the end of December I will have a test now.
Do you work or are you a student?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi sai về thì và cấu trúc câu.
Exemplo: I am a student currently studying in grade 11.
Where do you study?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và cấu trúc câu. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi sai như 'I'm study'.
Exemplo: I study at a high school, and I am currently preparing for university entrance exams.
Is it a good place to study?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi chia động từ. Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên có liên kết logic và rõ ràng.
Exemplo: Yes, my school is a good place to study because the teachers are very helpful and can answer all my questions. I also enjoy helping my friends with their studies.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'adding' nên là 'add'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng dạng động từ sau 'could'.
Exemplo: To be honest, I think my school is quite nice at the moment. However, I believe it would be beneficial if the school could expand and add new buildings to accommodate more students and provide better facilities.
What are your future study plans?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lỗi sai về thì và cấu trúc câu.
Exemplo: My future study plan is to improve my four English skills because I will take an important test at the end of December.
× I'm a student and I study a great 11.
✓ I'm a student and I study a great deal.
The phrase 'a great 11' is incorrect because '11' is a number and does not fit the context. The correct quantifier is 'a great deal' to express a large amount of study.
× I'm study at high school and now I'm planning to prepare for university entrance exams.
✓ I study at high school and now I'm planning to prepare for university entrance exams.
The phrase 'I'm study' is incorrect because 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' which should be followed by a verb in the -ing form. Since the intended meaning is simple present tense, 'I study' is correct.
× my teachers can answers all my curious about this subject on I can.
✓ my teachers can answer all my questions about this subject and I can teach my friends too.
The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'answers' should be 'answer'. Also, 'curious' is an adjective, the correct noun is 'questions'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.
× Teach my friends too.
✓ I can teach my friends too.
The sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I can' completes the sentence.
× However, I believe it would be beneficial if the school could expand and adding new buildings to accommodate more students and provide better facilities.
✓ However, I believe it would be beneficial if the school could expand and add new buildings to accommodate more students and provide better facilities.
After 'could', the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Therefore, 'adding' should be 'add'.
× I guess not only me but also young people, they will have a plan for the future and my futures.
✓ I guess not only I but also young people will have plans for the future, including my own.
The sentence has redundant pronouns and unclear structure. 'Not only me but also young people, they' is incorrect; 'not only I but also young people' is correct. 'My futures' should be 'my own future' or 'my own plans'.
× Thought the blends aren't improved.
✓ Though the skills aren't improved.
'Thought' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'Though'. 'Blends' is unclear; likely intended 'skills' or 'abilities'.
× My 4 skill in I'll test because at the end of December I will have a test now.
✓ My four skills will be tested because at the end of December I will have a test.
The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'My 4 skill in I'll test' is incorrect; it should be 'My four skills will be tested'. The phrase 'I will have a test now' conflicts with 'at the end of December'; 'now' is removed for clarity.