Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且信息表达不清晰。建议加强语法练习，注意句子完整性，并使用连贯的表达方式。

Exemplo: I have a part-time job at a hospital where I edit images and analyze data. Usually, I collect data and create charts or graphs to support my proposals.

Sugestão: 回答内容不连贯，时态混乱，且未直接回答问题。建议练习时态使用，保持回答的连贯性，并直接回应问题。

Exemplo: I studied at a university in Taiwan. Currently, I am working part-time at a hospital.

Sugestão: 回答表达有些断断续续，句子不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study because I enjoyed my time on campus. I made many friends there, and I really miss them now that I live in a different country.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且信息不具体。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，并提供具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the library to improve its resources because when I studied there, the internet access and available materials were quite limited.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议练习句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并保持逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I plan to finish my master's degree because of my limited budget, and I want to start working soon. Therefore, I practice English every day since I live in a different country and English is an important skill.

× My work involves. Images editing and data analyzes and hospital and I usually need to collect the data and progress to chart or graph to present my proposal.

✓ My work involves image editing and data analysis in the hospital, and I usually need to collect data and process it into charts or graphs to present my proposal.

这里“Images editing”应为“image editing”，因为“image”作为不可数名词使用；“data analyzes”应为“data analysis”，因为“analysis”是不可数名词，且“analyzes”是动词形式，使用错误。

× I studied in Taiwan when I was a university students about.

✓ I studied in Taiwan when I was a university student.

“students”应为单数“student”，因为主语是“我”，表示单个人。

× Now I am working. Now I have a part time job in the hospital.

✓ Now I am working. I have a part-time job in the hospital.

“part time”应连写为“part-time”，作为复合形容词修饰“job”。

× Yes, I believe it's a good place to study because I really enjoy the. Memories when I spent a year in the campus and it was a lovely place that I have a lot of friends.

✓ Yes, I believe it's a good place to study because I really enjoy the memories when I spent a year on campus, and it was a lovely place where I had a lot of friends.

“the. Memories”中“the.”多余且断句错误，应连写为“the memories”；“in the campus”应为“on campus”，因为“campus”前通常不加冠词且用介词“on”；“that I have a lot of friends”应为“where I had a lot of friends”，使用关系副词“where”且时态应与过去时间一致。

× I really miss them and since now I'm living in a different country.

✓ I really miss them since now I'm living in a different country.

“and since now”连接词使用不当，应直接用“since”表示原因。

× Yes, I would like to have some improvement to half of the library resources because when I was a study in the temperance are there is there was only in limited. Up Internet accessible resources.

✓ Yes, I would like to see some improvements in the library resources because when I was studying in the temperance area, there were only limited internet-accessible resources.

“improvement to half of the library resources”应为“improvements in the library resources”，介词使用错误；“when I was a study”应为“when I was studying”，动词形式错误；“temperance are”应为“temperance area”，拼写错误；“there is there was only in limited. Up Internet accessible resources”语序混乱，应改为“there were only limited internet-accessible resources”。

× I will try to finish my study and this is a master because I have a limited budget and I would like to work as soon as possible.

✓ I will try to finish my studies and obtain a master's degree because I have a limited budget and would like to work as soon as possible.

“finish my study and this is a master”表达不清，应为“finish my studies and obtain a master's degree”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× So I practice English everyday because I'm living in a different country and English is language is skill.

✓ So I practice English every day because I'm living in a different country and English is an important skill.

“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词短语“every day”；“English is language is skill”语法错误，应为“English is an important skill”。