Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: I'm currently a full-time student studying social work, and I have been doing so for several years.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并准确描述学校的地理位置和特点。

Exemplo: I study at Gentle University, which is one of the most prestigious universities in China. It is located in the capital city of Shandong Province, and I really like the campus because it has amazing scenery and convenient facilities.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议使用更准确的表达，并且避免重复之前的内容。

Exemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because the campus has beautiful scenery and excellent facilities. Moreover, the academic environment is very supportive and motivating.

Sugestão: 回答表达较为清晰，但存在语法错误和不连贯的句子，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确。

Exemplo: Overall, I'm quite satisfied with where I live, but I think the Wi-Fi could be improved. In some older buildings, the signal is weak, which makes it difficult for students to research online.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明未来的学习计划，并使用正确的词汇。

Exemplo: Actually, I plan to pursue a doctoral degree in the future because I am passionate about my major and want to explore more knowledge in this field.

× I'm currently a full time student and have been studied for many years and measuring social work.

✓ I'm currently a full-time student and have been studying for many years and majoring in social work.

这里的动词时态错误，'have been studied' 应该是现在完成进行时，表示动作从过去持续到现在，正确形式是 'have been studying'。另外，'measuring' 应为 'majoring'，表示主修专业。

× I currently study at Gentle University, which is one of the most prestigious university in China.

✓ I currently study at Gentle University, which is one of the most prestigious universities in China.

'one of the most prestigious university' 中 'university' 应为复数形式 'universities'，因为 'one of the...' 后面应接复数名词。

× It is no candidate in Chin and the capital city of Shandong Province are really like my campus because it has.

✓ It is located in China and the capital city of Shandong Province. I really like my campus because it has...

原句结构混乱，'no candidate in Chin' 语义不明，且 'are really like my campus' 主谓不一致。应改为清晰表达地点和喜好。

× Amazing scenery and convenient facilities there.

✓ There is amazing scenery and convenient facilities there.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整，应加上 'There is' 使句子完整。

× Oh sure, as I said before, it has a perfect scenery and convenient facilities.

✓ Oh sure, as I said before, it has perfect scenery and convenient facilities.

'scenery' 是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词 'a'。

× So starting there is much convenient for many people and I really found of the academic environment there.

✓ So studying there is much more convenient for many people and I really am fond of the academic environment there.

'starting' 应为 'studying'，'much convenient' 应为 'much more convenient'，'found of' 应为 'fond of'，这些都是介词和词汇搭配错误。

× Overall, I'm quiet satisfied with the place where I leave.

✓ Overall, I'm quite satisfied with the place where I live.

'quiet' 应为副词 'quite'，'leave' 应为 'live'，表示居住。

× Uh, but I think the Wi-Fi could be improved.

✓ Uh, I think the Wi-Fi could be improved.

句首同时使用 'Uh' 和 'but' 连接词，结构不自然，应去掉 'but'。

× In some older buildings the Wi-Fi is weak. Makes it difficult for student too. Research Online Resurface.

✓ In some older buildings, the Wi-Fi is weak, which makes it difficult for students to research online resources.

第二句缺少主语，第三句词汇错误且结构混乱，应合并并改正为完整句子。

× Actually, I plan to pursue her. Doctor Digre in the future because I'm passionate about it, my measure and a reality to like to explore more knowledge in the aerials.

✓ Actually, I plan to pursue a Doctor Degree in the future because I'm passionate about it, my major, and I really would like to explore more knowledge in the areas.

'her' 应为 'a'，'Doctor Digre' 拼写错误，应为 'Doctor Degree'，'my measure and a reality to like' 语法混乱，应改为 'my major, and I really would like'，'aerials' 应为 'areas'。