Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: I am currently an intern at a company in Vietnam. I have been working there for two months, and I am very excited to gain practical experience in my field.

Sugestão: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I study at Hershey University of Franking, majoring in Finance. I enjoy learning about numbers and economic information because it helps me understand how countries develop and interact.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the teachers are always willing to help students when we face difficulties. The environment is supportive and friendly.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả môi trường học tập.

Exemplo: I am satisfied with my school and I don't want to change anything. The environment is peaceful and beautiful, with many flowers that make it a pleasant place to study.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời câu hỏi khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, bổ sung lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: In the future, I want to learn other languages, such as Chinese, because in my work I need to understand both English and Chinese. This will help me develop my career further.

× Ankari, an intern in a bag in pink of Vietnam.

✓ I am Ankari, an intern at a company called Bag in Pink in Vietnam.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, making it incomplete and confusing. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject and verb, clarifying the meaning.

× I'm just a work here for two months for intern.

✓ I have been working here as an intern for two months.

The phrase 'I'm just a work' is incorrect; the present continuous form 'I am working' or present perfect continuous 'I have been working' is appropriate to express ongoing action. Also, 'for intern' is incorrect; 'as an intern' is correct.

× I'm really excited when I work in want to have.

✓ I'm really excited to work here and gain experience.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The correction provides a clear expression of excitement and intention.

× I study at Hershey University of Franking and my major is Finance an by English because whether young I very excited when I when I clearn numbers an eye.

✓ I study at Hershey University of Franking, and my major is Finance and English because since I was young, I have been very excited when I learn about numbers and finance.

The original sentence has multiple errors including unclear phrases and incorrect word usage. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× Really like when I great information about economies in country or integrate.

✓ I really like it when I get information about the economy of a country or international integration.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence with proper verb usage and clearer meaning.

× Oh yes, I think my school is a good place to study because they share very cyane always a willing when a happy path student when they when when we face a difficult situation an.

✓ Oh yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the staff are always willing to help students when we face difficult situations.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear words. The correction uses appropriate pronouns and clearer vocabulary.

× Uh, I think my screen is very, uh, every go good.

✓ Uh, I think my school is very good.

The original sentence contains unclear words and structure. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence.

× And so I think I don't want to change anything because they shows a very Cyane nice.

✓ So I think I don't want to change anything because it has a very nice environment.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'school' which is singular; 'it' is correct. Also, 'shows' is incorrect here.

× The environment in my school is very a peaceful man with many flowers.

✓ The environment in my school is very peaceful with many flowers.

The phrase 'very a peaceful man' is incorrect; 'very peaceful' is correct. Also, 'man' is irrelevant here.

× Uh, in the future I want to learn a love other languages like uhm.

✓ Uh, in the future I want to learn other languages like, uh,

The phrase 'a love other languages' is incorrect; 'other languages' without 'a love' is correct.

× Chinese because in my work I need to understand uh some languages like English or Chinese.

✓ Chinese because at my work I need to understand some languages like English and Chinese.

The sentence is fragmented; the correction connects ideas properly and uses correct prepositions.

× So I want to develop in my work.

✓ So I want to develop my skills for my work.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies the intention to improve skills related to work.