Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更直接回应问题，避免不必要的信息冗余。比如年龄信息不是必需的，且表达应更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I am a student at Nanjing Normal University, majoring in history. I focus on studying Chinese history, especially the history of traditional clothing.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰。应使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确表达借阅电子书的便利。

Exemplo: I usually study in the university library because I need many books for my history major. However, since physical books are heavy, I often borrow e-books from the library, which is very convenient.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，且表达不够自然。应使用正确的句式和词汇，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I think the university library is a good place to study. It is large and well-equipped with many computers, which help me access information related to my major. Sometimes, I can also discuss my studies online with tutors.

Sugestão: 表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议用更准确的词汇表达想法，并具体说明希望图书馆做出的改变。

Exemplo: I would like the library to make some changes, such as implementing clearer rules to keep the environment clean and organized. Also, it would be helpful if the library could offer secondhand books for students to borrow.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不流畅。应明确说明未来学习计划，并使用连词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I have a clear plan for my future studies. First, I want to complete my history degree at university. Then, I hope to travel to other countries to learn more about their cultures and histories.

× My major is history and I'll learn about the Chinese history on the garment history in the past.

✓ My major is history and I'll learn about Chinese history and garment history in the past.

句中“on the garment history”使用了错误的介词“on”，应直接连接名词短语。去掉“the”使表达更自然。

× I study in my university library because my major is history it means I need to re loss of bulk.

✓ I study in my university library because my major is history, which means I need to read a lot of books.

原句中“re loss of bulk”是拼写错误，应为“read a lot of books”，且句子缺少连接词，需用“which means”连接。

× But real book are very heavy and not easy to carry.

✓ But real books are very heavy and not easy to carry.

“book”应为复数形式“books”，因为指的是多本书。

× So I can borrow some e-books from my level rate to rate as many as you like on.

✓ So I can borrow some e-books from my library to read as many as I like.

原句中“level rate to rate”无意义，应为“library to read”，且“on”多余。

× I think it is a good place to study on.

✓ I think it is a good place to study.

“study”后不需要介词“on”，直接用不定式或动词原形。

× My university library is very large and the smart.

✓ My university library is very large and smart.

“the smart”错误，形容词前不加定冠词。

× We have lots of computers and you can check about you major knowledge.

✓ We have lots of computers and you can check your major knowledge.

“you major”应为“your major”，形容词性物主代词。

× Sometimes you can chat with you then tutor about you starting at line.

✓ Sometimes you can chat with your tutor about your studying online.

“you then tutor”应为“your tutor”，“you starting at line”应为“your studying online”，代词和表达错误。

× Actually, I think my library can challenge change of you.

✓ Actually, I think my library can change.

“challenge change of you”表达错误，意思不清，应简化为“can change”。

× For example, I think it can set up some new rule to protect the environment more clear and uncluttered.

✓ For example, I think it can set up some new rules to protect the environment more clearly and keep it uncluttered.

“rule”应为复数“rules”，“more clear”应为副词“more clearly”，且句子结构需调整。

× Sometimes I think it can borrow some secondhand books for students.

✓ Sometimes I think it can lend some secondhand books to students.

图书馆是借出书籍，应使用“lend”而非“borrow”，且“for students”改为“to students”。

× I think I have a pretty plan about my future study.

✓ I think I have a good plan for my future study.

“pretty plan”搭配不当，应使用“good plan”，且“about”改为“for”。

× Firstly, I think I must I have to finish my history class in my university.

✓ Firstly, I think I must finish my history classes at my university.

“must I have to”重复，应选其一；“class”应为复数“classes”；“in”改为“at”。

× Secondly, I think maybe I will travel to other countries to know how to.

✓ Secondly, I think maybe I will travel to other countries to learn more.

“to know how to”不完整，应改为“to learn more”或类似表达。