Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较简短且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题并补充简短信息，避免地名错误。

Exemplo: I am currently a student at Southwestern Petroleum University, where I am studying engineering.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用连贯句子，避免重复和错误表达，清晰描述学校位置和设施。

Exemplo: I study at a university in the city centre, which is very convenient. It has excellent facilities, including modern classrooms and a large library that greatly support my studies.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达并使用连接词使内容连贯，具体说明学校优点。

Exemplo: Absolutely. My university has modern classrooms and a large collection of books and resources. Moreover, there are many helpful teachers available when students face difficulties.

Sugestão: 回答中存在表达不清和用词错误，建议使用连贯句子，明确表达改进建议，避免拼写错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like my university to improve the study environment by adding more quiet zones with comfortable settings, which would help students concentrate better. Additionally, upgrading technology, such as providing faster Wi-Fi, would be beneficial.

Sugestão: 回答语法和表达不够准确，建议使用连贯句子，清晰描述未来计划和理由。

Exemplo: My major is social work, which requires several years to complete. I plan to study hard to earn a high degree and find a company related to my field to gain work experience. This will give me an advantage after graduation.

× I study at a university located in the city centre, which is very convenient for me and the campers, has excellent facilities including modern classrooms and a big library. Which greatly suppose my study.

✓ I study at a university located in the city centre, which is very convenient for me and the campers, and it has excellent facilities including modern classrooms and a big library, which greatly supports my study.

原句中存在句子结构错误，使用了两个独立句子“...a big library.”和“Which greatly suppose my study.”，导致表达不完整且不连贯。应将其合并为一个完整句子，并将“suppose”改为“supports”，使句意明确。建议使用连词“and”连接两个分句，并用关系代词“which”引导定语从句修饰前面的内容。

× my university offers me with modern classrooms and a large quantities of books and other resources which you can which you can find everything you want.

✓ my university offers me modern classrooms and a large quantity of books and other resources where you can find everything you want.

“offer”动词后不需要介词“with”，应直接接宾语。此外，“a large quantities”中“quantities”应为单数“quantity”，因为前面有不定冠词“a”。“which you can which you can”重复，应删除重复部分。最后，“which”指代地点时应改为“where”。

× there are many teachers that you can ask them for help when you have difficulties.

✓ there are many teachers whom you can ask for help when you have difficulties.

关系代词“that”后不应再加宾格代词“them”，造成重复。应使用“whom”作为关系代词的宾格，且去掉“them”。

× adding more quieter zones in a comfortable setting.

✓ adding more quiet zones in a comfortable setting.

“quieter”是比较级，不能与“more”连用。应使用形容词原级“quiet”与“more”搭配，构成“more quiet zones”。

× My major is a social work which needs for years to get the diploma so I will study harder to get high degrees and I plan to find a company.

✓ My major is social work, which takes four years to get the diploma, so I will study harder to get high degrees and I plan to find a company.

“social work”作为专业名词前不加冠词“a”。“needs for years”表达不正确，应改为“takes four years”或“needs four years”。此外，句子中缺少逗号分隔定语从句。