Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些重复和不够清晰，建议直接回答问题，简洁明了地说明你的身份状态，并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: I graduated from university two years ago, and I recently quit my job last month, so currently I am not working or studying.

Sugestão: 回答时应注意时态一致，避免时间表达混乱，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I studied at Inner Mongolia University, which is a well-known university located in northern China, and I graduated two years ago.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

Exemplo: In my opinion, Inner Mongolia University is a quiet and good place to study. For example, the library is comfortable and peaceful, so I enjoyed spending a lot of time there.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但可以用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Although I have graduated, I hope the university can add a large swimming pool in the future so that students can relax and have fun during the summer.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议简洁明了地说明未来计划，并使用正确的语法结构。

Exemplo: I recently quit my job and now I am preparing to apply for graduate school. I want to study a new major in IT filmmaking in the future.

× Well, it's hard to see that it's hard to answer this question because I graduated from my university for two years, but on the other hand, I just quit my last job last month.

✓ Well, it's hard to say that it's hard to answer this question because I graduated from my university two years ago, but on the other hand, I just quit my last job last month.

The phrase 'graduated from my university for two years' is incorrect because 'for two years' suggests a duration, which is not appropriate here. Instead, 'two years ago' correctly indicates the time when the graduation happened. Also, 'see' should be 'say' to express difficulty in answering.

× I studied at Inner Mongolia University about four years ago and I graduated. Two years ago it's a well known university located in the north part or of China where I completed my degree.

✓ I studied at Inner Mongolia University about four years ago and I graduated two years ago. It's a well-known university located in the northern part of China where I completed my degree.

The sentence has tense and punctuation issues. 'Two years ago' should be connected to the previous sentence to clarify when the graduation happened. 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective. 'North part or of China' is incorrect; it should be 'northern part of China'.

× Well, you my opinion, your Inner Mongolia University, it's quieter. Fast, but is quite a good place for study the library of eight it's quiet and comfortable I like spend a lot of time to study at that place with my. Loom it.

✓ Well, in my opinion, Inner Mongolia University is quieter and is quite a good place to study. The library is quiet and comfortable. I like to spend a lot of time studying at that place with my friends.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and sentence structure errors. 'You my opinion' should be 'in my opinion'. 'Your Inner Mongolia University' is incorrect; it should be 'Inner Mongolia University'. 'It's quieter. Fast,' is unclear and likely a mistake. 'For study' should be 'to study'. 'I like spend' should be 'I like to spend'. 'With my. Loom it.' is unclear and corrected to 'with my friends' for clarity.

× Yes, definitely, although I'm graduated from university but I hope it can be changed in the future. For example, I hope to add a huge swimming pool in the school so that students can hang out and have lots of fun in the summer.

✓ Yes, definitely. Although I have graduated from university, I hope it can be changed in the future. For example, I hope they add a huge swimming pool to the school so that students can hang out and have lots of fun in the summer.

'I'm graduated' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have graduated'. The sentence is a run-on and should be split. 'I hope it can be changed' is vague; 'I hope they add' is clearer. 'In the school' should be 'to the school' when referring to adding facilities.

× Well, as I saw it, I adjust to quit my last job and I have no work right now, but I'm preparing for apply a new graduation school and I would like I like I want to. Study a new major in the future IT filmmaking.

✓ Well, as I see it, I quit my last job and I have no work right now, but I'm preparing to apply to a new graduate school and I want to study a new major in the future, IT filmmaking.

'As I saw it' should be 'as I see it' to indicate present opinion. 'I adjust to quit' is incorrect; 'I quit' is correct past tense. 'Preparing for apply' should be 'preparing to apply'. 'Graduation school' should be 'graduate school'. The repeated 'I would like I like I want to' is redundant and corrected to 'I want to'.