Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且信息组织混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达专业名称。

Exemplo: I am currently a senior student at Northwestern University, majoring in Drama, Cinema, Television, and Literature. I enjoy this major because it offers many interesting courses, such as the history of film and Western films in China.

Sugestão: 回答中存在发音和拼写错误（如“Shea”、“CNN”），信息表达不清晰且缺乏连贯性。建议准确表达地名，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: I study at Northwestern University, which is located in Xi'an city, Shaanxi province, in central China. Xi'an is famous for its rich history, as it is one of the oldest cities in China with over 5,000 years of culture.

Sugestão: 回答中代词使用错误（“she”指代城市不合适），表达不够具体，缺乏逻辑连接。建议使用正确代词，增加具体例子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because Xi'an has developed into an international city. Therefore, students have many opportunities, such as choosing from a variety of majors and seeking help from professors to deepen their understanding.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: I would like the school to make the library larger because it is currently too small. As a result, not everyone can find a seat, and I often have to get up early to secure one.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够流畅，语法和用词不准确。建议简洁明了地表达未来计划，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

Exemplo: I plan to continue my studies in the future. Currently, I am taking this exam to apply for universities in Hong Kong and the UK because I want to pursue higher education abroad.

× Well, I'm still a senior school students study in the Northwestern University and my major is called Drama, Cinema, Television and Literature.

✓ Well, I'm still a senior school student studying at Northwestern University and my major is called Drama, Cinema, Television and Literature.

这里'students'是复数形式，但主语是单数的'I'，应使用单数'student'。另外，'study'应改为现在分词'studying'，表示正在进行的动作。

× There a lot of courses in this major like the fastic of film, the Western film in China.

✓ There are a lot of courses in this major like the basics of film, the Western film in China.

'There'句型后缺少动词'are'，应补充完整。

× Shea is in the middle of China and it has a lot of interesting history.

✓ Xi'an is in the middle of China and it has a lot of interesting history.

地名'Shea'应为'Xi'an'，且'history'是不可数名词，前面不加'a lot of'，应改为'a lot of interesting historical sites'或类似表达。此处主要是地名错误，非语法错误。

× China has 5000 years old history and CNN is one of the oldest city.

✓ China has 5000 years of history and Xi'an is one of the oldest cities.

'years old history'表达错误，应为'years of history'。'CNN'应为'Xi'an'，且'city'应为复数'cities'，因为是'one of the oldest cities'。

× Oh yes, of course, because she has developed into an international city.

✓ Oh yes, of course, because it has developed into an international city.

城市用it作代词，不能用she。

× So there are many different chances for students to choose.

✓ So there are many different opportunities for students to choose from.

'chances'用法不当，'opportunities'更合适，且'choose'后应加介词'from'。

× For example, you could choose which major you want to learn and if you want to have a deeper understanding, you could ask everyone.

✓ For example, you could choose which major you want to study and if you want to have a deeper understanding, you could ask everyone.

'learn'用法不当，通常说'study a major'。

× Well actually if my school could make the library larger maybe I will be happy because the library in my school is a little bit to small so not everyone could have a seat and I have to get up early to get a seat and.

✓ Well, actually, if my school could make the library larger, maybe I would be happy because the library in my school is a little bit too small so not everyone can have a seat and I have to get up early to get a seat.

'to small'应为'too small'，表示'太小'。'could'后面条件句中用虚拟语气，主句用'would'。'could have a seat'改为'can have a seat'更合适。

× Well, until now I still want to further my study.

✓ Well, until now I still want to further my studies.

'study'应为复数形式'studies'，表示学业。

× So as you can see, I'm sitting here and have this examination because I want to receive the offer from the universities in Hong Kong and the British.

✓ So as you can see, I'm sitting here and taking this examination because I want to receive offers from universities in Hong Kong and Britain.

'have this examination'应改为'taking this examination'。'the British'应为'Britain'。'offer'前不加定冠词，且'universities'前不加'the'。

× So as I still want to study in my future.

✓ So I still want to study in the future.

'in my future'表达不自然，应为'in the future'。