Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化表达，避免信息过载，同时注意冠词和专业名称的准确使用。

Exemplo: I am a student majoring in Art and Design Management. Currently, I am on a one-year exchange program studying French.

Sugestão: 回答信息丰富，但部分表达不够自然，如“choose to start in both countries”不太准确，建议使用更地道的表达，并注意语法和拼写错误。

Exemplo: I study in France and also pursue my diploma at the Central Academy of Fine Arts in Shanghai, one of China's top schools. Studying in both countries helps me gain diverse perspectives and improve my skills in different cultural environments.

Sugestão: 回答中存在多处拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰，建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，避免拼写错误，确保表达连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I think France is an excellent place to study, especially for art students. It is famous for its rich cultural heritage and world-renowned artworks. For example, visiting museums like the Louvre greatly broadens students' horizons in the field of art.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“to improved”应为“to improve”，“an”应为“and”，建议注意语法和拼写，提升表达准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I study art at the Business School to learn art business skills, but I would like the school to improve. For example, adding more quiet zones and comfortable seating areas would help students concentrate better. Also, having art corners could inspire creativity.

Sugestão: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误，如“live performance art”应为“live performance arts”或“performing arts”，“deep in my understanding”应为“deepen my understanding”，建议注意词汇搭配和语法。

Exemplo: I am preparing to pursue a master's degree at Seoul National University, majoring in performing arts. I am very interested in Korean culture because it has greatly influenced the arts worldwide, and I want to deepen my understanding through this program. This opportunity will help me develop my skills.

× I choose to start in both countries because it allows me to gain diverse perspectives and improve my skills in different culture environments.

✓ I choose to start in both countries because it allows me to gain diverse perspectives and improve my skills in different cultural environments.

这里的“culture environments”应为复合形容词“cultural environments”，表示“不同的文化环境”，需要用形容词形式修饰名词。

× Yes, I think Friends is an excellent place to stay study, especially for our students.

✓ Yes, I think France is an excellent place to study, especially for students like us.

原句中“Friends”应为“France”，且“stay study”结构错误，应为“to study”。此外，“our students”表达不自然，改为“students like us”更合适。

× It is famous for its rich cultural heritage and word Reno and artworks which can Greeley board and students horizens in field of art and for example, visiting museums like the Louvre provides invaluable in spirit.

✓ It is famous for its rich cultural heritage and world-renowned artworks which can greatly broaden students' horizons in the field of art. For example, visiting museums like the Louvre provides invaluable inspiration.

原句中“word Reno”应为“world-renowned”，“Greeley board”应为“greatly broaden”，“students horizens”应为“students' horizons”，“in spirit”应为“inspiration”，这些都是拼写和词语搭配错误。

× I would like the Business School to improved.

✓ I would like the Business School to improve.

“to improved”中“improved”是过去式，应该用动词原形“improve”作为不定式。

× For example, adding more quiet zones an comfortable sitting areas would help students concentrate better.

✓ For example, adding more quiet zones and comfortable sitting areas would help students concentrate better.

原句中“an”应为“and”，且“zones”和“areas”均为复数，保持一致。

× Additionally, it would be great to have some art corners available to inspire creativity and provider.

✓ Additionally, it would be great to have some art corners available to inspire creativity and provide support.

“provider”应为动词“provide”，表示“提供支持”，原句用词错误。

× I want to deep in my understanding through this program.

✓ I want to deepen my understanding through this program.

“deep”应为动词“deepen”，表示“加深”，原句中用词错误。