Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误和口语化表达，如“a real enjoying starting”不自然且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达身份和兴趣，避免使用不确定的语气词“right”。

Exemplo: I am currently a student at the University of South Wales, studying international property law. I find topics related to privacy and international regulations very interesting because they are highly relevant in today's digital world.

Sugestão: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法问题，如“More over”、“confortable well”。建议使用正式且准确的表达，避免口语缩写“'cause”，并注意拼写和语法的准确性。

Exemplo: I study at the University of South Wales in Australia. It is an excellent university because the teaching methods are clear and easy to understand. Moreover, the supportive learning environment helps me feel confident as I begin my studies.

Sugestão: 回答中有拼写错误如“becauses”、“felicities Anna”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意拼写，使用连贯的句子，并用恰当的连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, the college is a great place to study because it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and trees, creating a peaceful environment. Moreover, the college offers excellent facilities and resources that help students understand their subjects better. Overall, it provides a supportive atmosphere.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，如“don't want to the place where I started to change”、“cloud environment”、“priority for tests”。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和语法表达观点。

Exemplo: Actually, I don't want the place where I study to change because I really like it. It is a quiet and comfortable environment that helps me concentrate on my homework and prepare for tests. If the place changes, I might find it harder to focus.

Sugestão: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不清，如“Rayshan”、“a beautiful cultural that should be preserved word right”。建议使用准确的词汇表达自己的计划和理由，避免使用不确定的语气词。

Exemplo: I want to become a lawyer in my country specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property. I am passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has a rich and beautiful culture that should be preserved.

× A real enjoying starting international property law, especially topics related to privacy an international regulations.

✓ I really enjoy studying international property law, especially topics related to privacy and international regulations.

原句结构混乱，'A real enjoying starting'不符合英语表达习惯，应改为'I really enjoy studying'，使句子完整且语法正确。

× privacy an international regulations

✓ privacy and international regulations

原句中'privacy an international regulations'中'an'应为'and'，表示并列关系，属于连词使用错误。

× I started at university in Little South Wales in Australia.

✓ I started university in Little South Wales in Australia.

'start university'是固定搭配，不需要介词'at'，使用'at university'表示在大学里，而这里表达的是开始上大学，故去掉'at'。

× 'cause the teaching methods are clear and easy to understand.

✓ because the teaching methods are clear and easy to understand.

'cause'是口语缩写，正式书面语应使用完整形式'because'。

× More over, the supportive learning environment helps me feel confident and confortable well starting my studies.

✓ Moreover, the supportive learning environment helps me feel confident and comfortable while starting my studies.

'More over'应写作'Moreover'，'confortable'拼写错误，应为'comfortable'，'well starting'应为'while starting'，介词使用错误。

× Yes, the college is a very good place to study becauses it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and trees which created a peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, the college is a very good place to study because it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and trees which create a peaceful environment.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'；'which created'时态错误，应为'which create'与主句时态一致。

× Moreover, the college offers excellent felicities Anna resources that helps people understand their subjects better.

✓ Moreover, the college offers excellent facilities and resources that help people understand their subjects better.

'felicities'拼写错误，应为'facilities'；'Anna'应为'and'；'helps'应改为'help'，因为主语是复数。

× Overall, it provides A supportive atmosphere.

✓ Overall, it provides a supportive atmosphere.

冠词'A'应小写为'a'，因为它位于句中。

× Actually I don't want to the place where I started to change because I really like it.

✓ Actually, I don't want the place where I study to change because I really like it.

'want to the place'结构错误，应为'want the place'；'started'时态不当，应为现在时'study'，符合上下文。

× It is a very suitable and cloud environment which helps me concentrate on my homework and priority for tests.

✓ It is a very suitable and calm environment which helps me concentrate on my homework and prioritize for tests.

'cloud'拼写错误，应为'calm'；'priority'用词错误，应为动词'prioritize'。

× If the place or to change, I might find it harder to focus.

✓ If the place were to change, I might find it harder to focus.

条件句结构错误，应使用虚拟语气'If the place were to change'。

× I want to be a lawyer in my country specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property.

✓ I want to be a lawyer in my country specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property.

该句无明显语法错误，符合上下文。

× I am very passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has a Rayshan, a beautiful cultural that should be preserved word right.

✓ I am very passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has a rich, beautiful culture that should be preserved, right?

'Rayshan'拼写错误，应为'rich'；'cultural'用词错误，应为'noun'形式'culture'；'word right'应为'right?'，句尾疑问语气。