Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免句子过短和断裂，保持语言流畅自然。可以将断句合并，避免重复表达“really”。

Exemplo: I am currently a student at Sichuan University, majoring in teaching Chinese as an international language. I have a deep passion for this field because I enjoy helping people learn Chinese language and culture.

Sugestão: 回答中出现语法错误和重复，应注意句子结构完整，避免重复表达。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I study at Sichuan University, which is located in Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan. The campus is large with good facilities, and the teachers are very kind.

Sugestão: 回答较完整，但句子较长且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is a good place to study. The campus is beautiful with modern facilities, and the teachers are friendly and supportive. I really enjoy my time there.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。应注意主谓一致，句子完整，并具体说明想要改变的内容。

Exemplo: Although the campus is beautiful and the teachers are nice, I think the course design and syllabus need improvement because we haven't learned enough practical skills for our future jobs.

Sugestão: 回答中断句不连贯，词汇使用不准确。建议使用完整句子表达未来计划，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I plan to continue studying education because I am passionate about this field. I enjoy working with pupils and love the teaching profession.

× I'm majoring in teaching Chinese. As an international language.

✓ I'm majoring in teaching Chinese as an international language.

句子中“teaching Chinese”和“As an international language”之间不应有句号，应该合并成一句，使用正确的介词连接，表达完整的意思。

× I'm studying in Sichuan University, which local? Which located in Chengdu, the capital city in Sichuan.

✓ I'm studying at Sichuan University, which is located in Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan.

表示在某个学校学习，介词应使用“at”而非“in”。此外，“which local?”是错误表达，应为“which is located”。“capital city in Sichuan”应改为“capital city of Sichuan”，介词使用错误。

× I think the campus is big, is big and the equipment are nice.

✓ I think the campus is big, and the equipment is nice.

“equipment”是不可数名词，应该用单数动词“is”，而不是复数“are”。

× I suppose, although the campus. It's very beautiful. And our teachers is nice though.

✓ I suppose, although the campus is very beautiful, and our teachers are nice though.

句子断裂不完整，应合并为一句话。主语“teachers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× However, I think our course design and syllables need to change a lot because we didn't study much in our school and we can't our jobs.

✓ However, I think our course design and syllabus need to change a lot because we didn't study much in our school and we can't get our jobs.

“syllables”应为“syllabus”（课程大纲），单复数错误。句子后半部分缺少动词，应补充“get”表示“找到工作”。

× we can't our jobs.

✓ we can't get our jobs.

“can't”后面应接动词原形，缺少动词“get”，导致句子不完整。

× Maybe I will go on. Study in education.

✓ Maybe I will go on to study education.

“go on”后应接动词不定式“to study”，而不是分开成两句。

× Because I really have a passionate, I, I'm really passionate on that field.

✓ Because I really have a passion, I'm really passionate about that field.

“have a passionate”错误，应为“have a passion”。“passionate”后应接介词“about”，而不是“on”。

× I really like to stay with pupils.

✓ I really like to work with pupils.

“stay with pupils”表达不准确，应该用“work with pupils”表示“和学生一起工作”。