School— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence saying where the school is, then add one or two specific supporting details (facilities or number of students). Use correct word order and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: My school is located in the city centre. It has a large student body and good facilities, such as science labs and a library, so students can access academic resources easily.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a specific detail. Fix grammar and choose appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'computers are essential' not 'computer is a very essential'). Avoid vague sentences like 'It is a very crucial.'

Exemplo: Yes, I like my school because it offers useful amenities, for example a computer science lab. Computers are essential for learning practical skills and exploring new ideas, which makes lessons more engaging.

Sugestão: Start with a direct opinion, then give one or two concrete reasons. Use correct articles and plural forms, and link ideas with simple connectors like 'because' and 'so'. Avoid redundancy ('useful and accessible').

Exemplo: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has helpful facilities and supportive teachers. For instance, teachers assist students with difficult tasks, so learning is more effective.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence describing the environment, then provide specific examples of behaviours or features (quiet study areas, rules). Avoid repeating words and correct phrasing for qualities (punctuality, honesty).

Exemplo: The school environment is pleasant and calm, which supports learning. For example, quiet study areas and clear rules encourage punctuality, honesty and mutual respect among students.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly and give a specific reason or example. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'Interest is crucial for study' not 'a very crucial') and avoid vague phrases like 'give their performance in a best way.'

Exemplo: Interest is crucial for study because motivated students concentrate better and retain information longer. For example, when I am interested in a topic I spend more time practising and my test results improve.

× My school is located in the center of the city and every there are plenty of students who come to gain information and knowledge in school.

✓ My school is located in the center of the city, and there are plenty of students who come to gain information and knowledge at school.

Errors: misplaced adverb 'every' and wrong preposition 'in' after 'knowledge'. Use 'there are' to state existence and 'at school' to indicate location. Also add a comma before the conjunction 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: remove 'every', use 'there are', and use 'at school' for location.

× They can easily gain information academic.

✓ They can easily gain academic information.

Error: incorrect word order and missing adjective placement. 'Academic' should modify 'information' and appear before it. Suggestion: place adjectives before the nouns they modify: 'academic information'.

× Yes, I like my school because there are various amenities for students such as computer science lab.

✓ Yes, I like my school because there are various amenities for students, such as a computer science lab.

Error: missing article 'a' before 'computer science lab' and punctuation needed before 'such as'. Use 'a' for a singular, countable noun. Suggestion: add 'a' and a comma: 'such as a computer science lab.'

× Computer is a very essential for a student to learn new skills as well as science can help to explore new things and places.

✓ Computers are very essential for students to learn new skills, and science can help them explore new things and places.

Errors: missing plural for 'computer' and wrong article 'a' before uncountable idea; subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference. Use plural 'Computers are' to speak generally, use 'students' plural, and 'them' to refer to students. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and match verbs accordingly.

× It is a very crucial.

✓ It is very important.

Error: 'crucial' is an adjective that typically needs a complement or stronger collocation; the article 'a' is incorrect before 'crucial' when used predicatively. Use 'very important' or 'crucial' without 'a'. Suggestion: use 'It is very important' or 'It is crucial.'

× I think my school is a good place for a study because there are various amenities for students, they can easily gain academic information and they can solve difficult task with the help of teachers which is a very useful and accessible.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because there are various amenities for students; they can easily gain academic information and solve difficult tasks with the help of teachers, which is very useful and accessible.

Errors: incorrect article 'a' before 'study' (use infinitive 'to study'), run-on sentence and punctuation issues, plural needed 'tasks', and clause 'which is very useful and accessible' should refer clearly to 'help' or 'amenities'. Suggestion: use 'a good place to study', pluralize 'tasks', use punctuation to separate clauses, and ensure 'which' refers to the correct noun.

× The environment in my school is very pleasant and calm which helps to maintain discipline in school and pupils also learn how to help others discipline, punctuality, honesty and so on which helps to maintain environment very pleasant.

✓ The environment in my school is very pleasant and calm, which helps maintain discipline, and pupils also learn values such as discipline, punctuality, and honesty, which makes the environment even more pleasant.

Errors: punctuation and conjunction misuse leading to run-on and unclear meaning; repetition and incorrect word order 'help others discipline'. Suggestion: add commas, split ideas with 'and', list the values with 'such as', and make the final clause clearly refer to the values improving the environment.

× Interest is a very crucial for a study because with the help of interest they can easily understand the task and give their performance in a best way which is very beneficial for the students.

✓ Interest is very important for studying because, with the help of interest, students can easily understand tasks and perform their best, which is very beneficial for them.

Errors: incorrect article 'a' before 'very crucial' and before 'study', awkward phrasing 'give their performance in a best way'. Use 'important for studying' or 'important for a study' with corrected article, but 'for studying' is natural. Also change 'they' to 'students' for clarity and pluralize 'tasks'. Suggestion: use 'important for studying', 'perform their best', and add commas for clarity.

× It create a great environment among learners they can easily understand.

✓ It creates a great environment among learners, so they can easily understand.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('create' should be 'creates' for singular 'It') and run-on sentence lacking conjunction or punctuation. Suggestion: use correct verb form 'creates' and connect clauses with a conjunction like 'so' and a comma.