Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer, correct grammar, and add logical linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly describe one specific example with correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I visited Miami, I photographed the beautiful shoreline of Miami Beach because the sky was clear and the weather was perfect, so the light highlighted the blue water and made a stunning scene.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and one specific detail; use linking words to connect ideas and correct awkward phrasing. Avoid filler phrases and finish the sentence logically.

Exemplo: I generally prefer urban views because I live in a large, densely populated city. For instance, the tall skyscrapers and busy streets create interesting shapes and movement, which I find visually striking.

Sugestão: Be specific and organized: state your preference clearly, give a concise reason, and provide one clear example. Remove hesitations and fix vocabulary errors (e.g., 'fields' vs 'views', 'countries' singular). Use linking words to make it coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they help me relax and feel familiar. For example, whenever I need to reduce stress, I go to a nearby riverside or countryside area to enjoy the quiet scenery and fresh air.

× I love taking pictures of from different fields.

✓ I love taking pictures of different places.

The preposition 'of' followed by 'from' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'of' or 'from' appropriately; here 'taking pictures of different places' is natural. Also 'fields' may be semantically odd; 'places' fits general 'views'. Use verb + -ing 'taking' correctly with a single preposition.

× I remember I was visiting Miami, I saw the beautiful coast shoreline of the Miami Beach and the weather was fantastic.

✓ I remember visiting Miami; I saw the beautiful shoreline of Miami Beach and the weather was fantastic.

Use simple past 'visited' or gerund 'visiting' for remembered actions. The original mixes past continuous and simple past awkwardly. 'Coast shoreline' is redundant; 'shoreline' or 'coast' alone is better. Also omit the article 'the' before 'Miami Beach'. The corrected sentence uses gerund 'visiting' to match 'I remember'.

× I can see the blue sky and there are only a few clouds so it is a beautiful size so I took.

✓ I could see the blue sky and there were only a few clouds, so it was a beautiful scene and I took photos.

The narrative refers to a past event, so use past tense ('could see', 'were', 'was'). 'Beautiful size' is incorrect; likely 'beautiful sight' or 'beautiful scene'. Also finish the clause by specifying what was taken: 'photos'. Ensure tense consistency throughout the sentence.

× I would generally prefer the views in urban areas.

✓ I would generally prefer views in urban areas.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before a general plural noun here. When speaking about preferences in general, omit 'the'.

× I myself live in a major populated city where there are lots of buildings which are very tall and I think it showed off the how busy.

✓ I live in a major, densely populated city where there are many very tall buildings, and I think it shows how busy it is.

'Omit redundant reflexive 'myself'. Use 'densely populated' instead of 'major populated'. 'Lots of' is colloquial; 'many' is better in formal correction. 'Showed off the how busy' is ungrammatical: use present tense 'shows' for a general truth and restructure to 'shows how busy it is'. Fix word order and pronoun 'it' to reference the city.

× I always prefer the fields in my own countries.

✓ I always prefer the countryside in my own country.

Use singular 'country' to match 'my own' and correct noun choice: 'fields' plural is acceptable but 'countryside' is more natural. 'Countries' is incorrect when referring to speaker's country; use singular.

× Umm, every time when I have to take a break to unwind for my stress, I always uh, travel uh, to cyclone and take uh, and try to enjoy the Riverside and.

✓ Every time I need a break to relieve stress, I always travel to the countryside and try to enjoy the riverside.

The original contains filler words and an unclear place 'cyclone' likely meant 'countryside'. Use 'need a break' or 'take a break' with purpose 'to relieve stress'. Remove hesitations and correct 'Riverside' to 'riverside' (common noun). Ensure sentence is complete and logical.