Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, avoid fillers and tense errors, and add a linking word and a short specific detail. Structure: a clear topic sentence, one linked supporting detail, and correct verb forms. For example, replace "uh" with a pause, use present perfect or simple present for habits (I often upload), and use one specific example to make it vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and city skylines because they help me remember trips, and I usually upload my favourite shots to Instagram after I get home.

Sugestão: Answer directly (state a preference), avoid repeating previous sentences, correct grammar (photographs help), and complete the example. Use a linking word (for example) and give one concrete detail about what you photograph and why. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing historic streets and unique architecture. For example, I often take sunset shots of old town squares and upload the best ones to Instagram to share with friends.

Sugestão: Respond directly and correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer...), use linking words (because), fix verb forms and articles, and give a specific supporting detail about a place and frequency. Avoid starting with "Will" and fix gerunds/infinitives.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the places are familiar and easy to reach. For instance, I often visit nearby mountains and take photos of the trails and valley views on weekends.

× Taking photos of different views helps me uh, remember special moments and places. And often I uploaded.

✓ Taking photos of different views helps me remember special moments and places, and I often upload them.

Original contains unnecessary filler 'uh' and two sentence fragments with incorrect past tense 'uploaded' that doesn't match present habitual action. Combine into one fluent sentence and use present simple 'upload' for habitual action; include 'them' to refer to 'photos'. Use a comma before coordinating conjunction joining two clauses.

× Yes, I love capturing beautiful scenes when I travel to urban or rural areas because photographs helps me remember special moments and places.

✓ Yes, I love capturing beautiful scenes when I travel to urban or rural areas because photographs help me remember special moments and places.

Subject 'photographs' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Use plural verb to agree with plural subject.

× For instance, I always take pictures of sunsets or historic streets and often I upload them to A to a social media apps like.

✓ For instance, I always take pictures of sunsets or historic streets and often upload them to social media apps like Instagram.

Original has awkward insertion 'and often I upload them to A to a social media apps like' and incorrect article 'a' with plural 'apps'. Remove redundant 'I', fix article usage, and give a clear example ('Instagram') or leave generic 'social media'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× Will I prefer my own home country owing to the familiar and it's easier to get to the fascinating places.

✓ I prefer my own home country because it is familiar and it is easier to get to fascinating places.

'Will I prefer' incorrectly uses future auxiliary 'will' and wrong word order for a statement. Use present simple 'I prefer' for general preference. 'Owing to the familiar' is ungrammatical; use 'because it is familiar'. Replace contraction 'it's' with 'it is' for clarity and remove extra 'the' before 'fascinating places'.

× For instance, I often go to the nearby mountains and taking some beautiful photos.

✓ For instance, I often go to the nearby mountains and take beautiful photos.

After coordinating 'and' connecting two verbs that share the same subject, use the base form 'take' not the -ing form 'taking'. Use parallel verb forms for clarity and correct grammar.