Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “like” repeated) and unclear phrases such as “study views.” Improve vocabulary to describe photography motives and effects.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture city skylines and seaside panoramas because taking photos helps me notice light and composition, which makes me appreciate the beauty around me.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a direct answer (urban or rural), then support with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid unrelated or confusing words (‘schools’, ‘fruits’, ‘ruse’). Use concrete details (e.g., mountains, waterfalls) and a linking phrase like “because” or “for example.”

Exemplo: I prefer rural views rather than urban ones because I enjoy photographing natural scenes. For example, I like mountains, forests and waterfalls, which offer varied textures and colours that are more peaceful and visually striking than city streets.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, complete sentence with a reason and a specific example. Correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like “goes.” Use linking words such as “because” and mention concrete features of your country that influence your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, the Philippines, because our islands offer stunning beaches and clear coastal scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing sunrise over the sea and the colourful fishing boats, which you won’t always find elsewhere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views especially when I like to study views that I see.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I want to study the scenes I see.

Repeated use of 'like' sounds awkward and 'study views that I see' is unnatural. Use 'want to' to express intention and simplify to 'study the scenes I see'. 'Taking' is correct as a gerund here, but the clause needed clearer verb choice and word order.

× Also taking different views can give me more beautiful perspective in life.

✓ Also, taking pictures of different views can give me a more beautiful perspective on life.

Missing comma after 'Also'. 'Taking different views' is unclear; use 'taking pictures of different views'. 'Perspective in life' should be 'perspective on life'. Include the article 'a' before 'more beautiful perspective'.

× I prefer rural area schools rather than urban area fruits because rural areas ruse is more stunning and beautiful examples.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because rural scenery is more stunning and beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'rural area schools' and 'urban area fruits' are incorrect collocations and pluralization. Use 'rural areas' and 'urban areas'. 'Rather than' often compares nouns directly; 'prefer X to Y' is clearer. 'ruse' is a misspelling; 'scenery' fits context. Remove 'examples' as unnecessary.

× I like taking pictures with nature's features and falls because capturing those beautiful scenes helped me appreciate the work of God and nature's itself.

✓ I like taking pictures of natural features and waterfalls because capturing those beautiful scenes helps me appreciate the work of God and of nature itself.

Use 'of' instead of 'with' after 'taking pictures'. 'Nature's features' should be 'natural features'; 'falls' should be 'waterfalls'. Verb tense should be present 'helps' to match habitual activity. 'Nature's itself' is incorrect; use 'of nature itself'.

× I prefer in my country what is the Philippines because we've been surrounded by water and goes.

✓ I prefer my own country, the Philippines, because it is surrounded by water and islands.

Incorrect structure 'I prefer in my country what is the Philippines'. Use 'I prefer my own country, the Philippines'. 'We've been surrounded by water and goes' is wrong: the Philippines 'is surrounded by water and consists of many islands'. Use present simple 'is surrounded' for facts; replace 'goes' with 'islands' or 'many islands'.