Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce filler words (uh), correct unclear word choice ('abuse' likely wrong), and make a concise two- to three-sentence reply: a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and include a specific example of a scene you photograph.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of attractive landscapes because they capture special moments. For example, when I visit the seaside I often photograph the sunset to remember the colors and the calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the same reason word ('because') twice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details and an example. Use varied vocabulary (greenery, countryside, landscapes) and a linking phrase such as 'for instance' to make it coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I love the greenery and open landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling fields and tree-lined paths since they feel peaceful and offer interesting textures.

Sugestão: Fix grammar (use 'I grew up') and complete the final idea. Provide a clear topic sentence plus details explaining emotional connection and a concrete example of a local place. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I grew up in a small village surrounded by green landscapes, so these scenes feel familiar and comforting. For example, I often photograph the rice terraces near my home because they remind me of childhood and change beautifully with the seasons.

× it is having a scenic uh atmosphere.

✓ it has a scenic atmosphere.

The verb phrase 'is having' is incorrect here because 'have' used to describe possession or a state is not normally used in continuous (present participle) form. Use simple present 'has' to indicate a general quality of the area. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× So whenever I get uh, this kind of abuse, I would like to take pictures.

✓ So whenever I come across this kind of beauty, I like to take pictures.

The word 'abuse' is wrong in context; likely intended 'beauty' or 'scene'. 'Get' plus 'this kind of' is informal and awkward; 'come across' or 'see' is better. Use simple present 'like' for habitual actions instead of 'would like' which suggests conditional desire. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I'm more into green color because whenever I see the greenery and scenic beauty, I would like to capture them.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like green scenery; whenever I see greenery and scenic beauty, I like to capture it.

'More into green color' is awkward; use 'like green scenery' or 'I prefer green landscapes.' 'Them' refers to 'greenery and scenic beauty' (uncountable), so singular 'it' or rephrase to plural items. Use simple present 'like to capture' for habitual action instead of 'would like.' Also avoid repeating 'because' twice; combine clauses or use a semicolon.

× I prefer views in my own country because I grown up in a small village which is surrounded by green landscapes so that it feels very.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I grew up in a small village surrounded by green landscapes, so it feels familiar and comfortable.

The verb 'grown' is the past participle and incorrect without an auxiliary; the simple past 'grew up' is required for the past event. 'Which is surrounded' can be reduced to 'surrounded' for conciseness. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so that it feels very' — add an adjective like 'familiar' or 'comfortable' to complete the idea.