Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing (e.g. “very wonderful”) and repetition (e.g. “appreciate” and “recall” used together). Use varied vocabulary and keep the response to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, landscape photos help me remember trips and the feelings I had at the time, and they also let me share those moments with friends. Because of this, I often take photos when I travel or visit scenic spots.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence stating preference (or that you like both), then add one clear, specific reason for each choice using linking words such as “because” or “while”. Correct grammar (e.g. “represents modernity”) and avoid vague words like “splendid” without detail. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban scenes appeal to me because of the modern skyline and busy streets, while rural landscapes attract me with wide-open fields, fresh air, and peaceful scenery.

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Begin with a clear statement, then give one specific example for each option. Avoid double negatives (e.g. “don't never”) and wordy phrases like “an abundance of views”. Use precise language (e.g. “new landscapes” or “different cultures”).

Exemplo: I like views both at home and abroad. At home, familiar places remind me of family and childhood memories; meanwhile, travelling abroad lets me see new landscapes and different cultures that I’ve never experienced before.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think that I can appreciate those pictures and recall some memories about the view and it is very wonderful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think I can appreciate those pictures, recall memories of the view, and they are very beautiful.

Incorrect or awkward use of tenses and phrasing: 'I think that I can appreciate' is wordy; 'recall some memories about the view' is unnatural and should be 'recall memories of the view'; 'it is very wonderful' uses singular 'it' to refer to plural 'pictures' and uses weak adjective 'wonderful.' Suggestion: use present tense consistently, match pronoun number with noun (they for pictures), and choose clearer adjectives (beautiful).

× I like both of them because in urban areas I can see a lot of high buildings or commercial complexes and it represents a modern in a place, but in rural areas I can see a lot of splendid views.

✓ I like both because in urban areas I can see many tall buildings and commercial complexes, which represent a modern place, while in rural areas I can see many splendid views.

Errors: 'a lot of high buildings' is better as 'many tall buildings' (adjective order and quantifier), 'it represents a modern in a place' is ungrammatical—'which represent a modern place' correctly matches plural subject and adjective order. 'But' replaced with 'while' for contrast. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable plural nouns, correct adjective order (tall buildings), ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer connectors.

× Actually, I like both of them because in my own country I can see all the views that I can associate with a lot of memories with my parents or my friends, but in other countries I can appreciate an abundance of views that I don't never seen before.

✓ Actually, I like both because in my own country I can see views that I associate with many memories of my parents and friends, while in other countries I can appreciate many views that I have never seen before.

Multiple issues addressed but within allowed types: 'all the views that I can associate with a lot of memories with my parents or my friends' is awkward—use 'views that I associate with many memories of my parents and friends.' 'I don't never seen before' contains a double negative and incorrect verb form; correct to present perfect 'I have never seen before' to indicate experience up to now. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual states ('I associate') and present perfect for life experiences ('have never seen'), avoid double negatives, and simplify phrasing.