Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng cần rút gọn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ để rõ ràng hơn. Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó là 1–2 câu bổ sung với liên từ phù hợp (ví dụ: because, so, and) và chi tiết cụ thể (nêu ví dụ về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp hoặc mạng xã hội bạn dùng).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments and places. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city parks when I hang out with friends, and I usually share the best shots on Instagram so they can see what I experienced.

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "in city" → "in the city", tránh tiếng ừ ừ). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi dùng liên từ để bổ sung lý do và ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: nightlife, architecture). Giữ không quá 3 câu.

Exemplo: I prefer views in the city because I love the skyline, especially at night when the lights are on. The city feels lively and energetic, with interesting architecture and busy streets that create dynamic photo opportunities.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể gọn hơn và cụ thể hơn bằng cách nêu một vài ví dụ cụ thể về phong cảnh trong nước khiến bạn tự hào. Tránh câu quá dài; dùng câu nối hợp lý (because, for example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and feel more connected to them. For example, I often photograph the coastline and national parks, which makes me proud of my country's natural beauty.

× Yes, I love capturing beautiful scenery when I hang out, taking photos help me remember special moment and places, and I also share sharing the moment I take that picture on social media with friends.

✓ Yes, I love capturing beautiful scenery when I hang out; taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I also share the moments I capture on social media with friends.

Error: missing third-person singular 's' on the verb 'help' and incorrect gerund/verb forms and singular/plural nouns. Suggestion: use 'taking photos helps' because the subject 'taking photos' is singular as a gerund phrase; use plural 'moments' to match 'photos' and change 'share sharing the moment I take that picture' to 'share the moments I capture' for clarity and correct verb form. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses correctly.

× Umm I prefer views in city since I love the city skyline especially at night with all the lights. Umm there's always something happening so there is a lively and energetic.

✓ Umm I prefer views in the city since I love the city skyline, especially at night with all the lights. Umm there's always something happening, so it is lively and energetic.

Error: missing definite article before 'city' and awkward sentence ending. Suggestion: use 'in the city' to refer to urban areas; add a comma before 'especially'; replace 'there is a lively and energetic' with 'it is lively and energetic' to refer to 'the city' and use proper adjective forms.

× Umm I prefer views in city since I love the city skyline especially at night with all the lights. Umm there's always something happening so there is a lively and energetic.

✓ Umm I prefer views in the city since I love the city skyline, especially at night with all the lights. Umm there's always something happening, so it is lively and energetic.

Error: noun/adjective agreement and missing article. Suggestion: 'the city skyline' is correct; ensure agreement by using 'it is lively and energetic' rather than 'there is a lively and energetic'.

× I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the scenery here, so I feel more connected to it, and I also feel proud of the natural beauty in my country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the scenery here, so I feel more connected to it, and I also feel proud of the natural beauty of my country.

Error: awkward preposition choice 'in my country' repeated; prefer 'of my country' to express possession of 'natural beauty'. Suggestion: use 'natural beauty of my country' for clearer, more natural English.