Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "we can't see the different point of view."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, when I photograph a seaside sunset, I focus on the changing colors and the reflections on the water, which makes the scene more memorable.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain why you prefer rural views with specific supporting details and a linking word. Avoid unclear terms like "patriots"—perhaps you meant "beauty" or "character."

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers peaceful, untouched landscapes. For instance, rolling hills, farms and narrow lanes show the natural beauty and unique character of the area, which I find relaxing and inspiring.

Sugestão: Make the sentence structure natural and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example," and correct grammar ("see what is different").

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover different landscapes and cultures. For example, when I visited a mountain village abroad, I enjoyed seeing traditional architecture and local festivals that were very different from what I know at home.

× I really like taking pictures of different views because we can't see the different point of view and we'll see what the difference of this object.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because we can see different points of view and notice the differences between objects.

The main clause 'I really like taking pictures' is fine. Errors: 'we can't see' contradicts the intent; changed to 'we can see'. 'the different point of view' should be plural and idiomatically 'different points of view'. 'we'll see what the difference of this object' is ungrammatical: use 'notice the differences between objects' to express comparing features. Also improved parallel structure and verb forms. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent and use plural nouns for multiple viewpoints.

× I prefer rural areas because the natural of this village or this area can see the patriots of this beautiful areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the nature of this village or area shows the beauty of these places.

Original has multiple errors: 'the natural' incorrect word form; correct noun is 'nature'. 'can see the patriots' makes no sense here; likely intended 'shows' or 'reveals' and 'beauty' rather than 'patriots'. 'this beautiful areas' mixes singular 'this' with plural 'areas' — corrected to 'these places'. Suggestions: use correct noun forms, match demonstratives (this/these), and choose verbs that convey perception (shows, reveals).

× To be honest, I prefer in other countries because I enjoy traveling and see what things different with my own country.

✓ To be honest, I prefer other countries because I enjoy traveling and seeing how things are different from my own country.

'prefer in other countries' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer other countries'. Parallel structure requires gerund after 'enjoy': 'enjoy traveling and seeing'. 'see what things different with my own country' is incorrect word order and missing verbs; corrected to 'seeing how things are different from my own country'. Suggestion: maintain parallel verb forms and use correct comparison structure 'different from'.

× For example, I can see the culture of this village or this area.

✓ For example, I can learn about the culture of a village or an area.

'the culture of this village or this area' is specific and repetitive; depending on context, general reference fits better: 'a village or an area'. Also 'see the culture' is awkward; use 'learn about' or 'experience' culture. Suggestion: choose appropriate determiners ('a' vs 'the') and verbs collocating with 'culture'.