Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and add a clear reason with one supporting detail. Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love to travel. For example, I have photographed landscapes in Japan, Vietnam and Thailand, capturing mountains, temples and coastal scenes to remember each place.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons and an example. Correct grammar ("prefer taking pictures of natural places") and use linking words like "because" or "for instance." Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in natural or rural areas because I enjoy peaceful scenery such as rivers, forests and the sea. For instance, I often photograph coastal sunsets and river valleys when I travel because they feel calming and photogenic.

Sugestão: Clarify the meaning (likely you meant "both" or "other countries") and avoid unclear words like "boat". Give a direct answer (e.g. "both") and support it with a reason and an example. Use correct grammar and a linking phrase such as "because" or "however."

Exemplo: I like views both in my own country and abroad because every place has unique features worth photographing. For example, local markets at home show everyday life, while overseas I enjoy photographing historic architecture and landscapes that are different from what I see at home.

× Yes, I like to take picture of different views because I love travel and I went to different countries uh, for example, Japan, Vietnam, Philippines, umm, Thailand, Singapore. So I love it take a picture in this kind of place because I think.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because I love to travel and I have been to different countries, for example, Japan, Vietnam, the Philippines, Thailand, and Singapore. So I love taking pictures in these kinds of places because I think they are beautiful.

Multiple issues fall under verb + -ing form and related areas: 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' (singular/plural and collocation), 'love travel' needs infinitive or 'to' before verb: 'love to travel' or 'love travelling' (here corrected to 'love to travel'), and 'I went to different countries' is acceptable but 'I have been to' fits present relevance. 'I love it take a picture' is ungrammatical; correct is 'I love taking pictures'. Also adjusted articles and plurals ('the Philippines', 'these kinds of places') and added a clear clause 'because I think they are beautiful' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: use gerund after verbs like 'love' when describing hobbies (I love taking photos) or use 'love to + verb' for preference; ensure noun number matches (pictures vs picture). Use 'the' for country names like the Philippines.

× I prefer views in the rural areas. Well, it's not really rural. I mean, I prefer take a pictures with a view with the natural places, with the trees, with rivers, the ocean, the sea. I.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas. Well, it's not really rural; I mean, I prefer taking pictures in natural places with trees, rivers, the ocean, and the sea.

Preposition errors and collocations: 'in the rural areas' is better as 'in rural areas' (no article). 'Prefer take a pictures' is wrong: after 'prefer' use gerund 'taking pictures' or 'to take pictures'. Use 'in' (not 'with') for photographing places: 'taking pictures in natural places'. Also use commas for list and 'the ocean and the sea' is redundant but acceptable. Suggestion: use 'prefer taking pictures in...' and avoid 'with a view with' — instead 'in natural places' or 'with natural scenery'. Ensure noun plural consistency.

× I prefer boat because any country or any place have a magic essence, a magic place you can look or you can choose. Any place will be magic if you're really looking a good place any.

✓ I prefer both because every country or place has a magical essence, a magical quality you can see or choose. Any place can be magical if you are really looking for a good spot.

Pronoun and determiner misuse: 'I prefer boat' is unclear — likely meant 'both' or 'both types'. 'Any country or any place have' needs singular verb 'has' for singular 'any country or place'. 'A magic essence, a magic place you can look or you can choose' is awkward; use 'magical essence' and 'you can see or choose'. 'Looking a good place' should be 'looking for a good spot' — 'look for' requires preposition. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'any' constructions, use correct pronouns/determiners ('every', 'any'), and use correct verb+preposition pairs like 'look for'.