Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 用词和句子结构要更清晰，避免词语错误与重复。先直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，用连接词保持连贯。注意发音与语法（例如“if I have a chance”，“on each trip”，“different scenes/views”）。建议练习简短流利句子并控制在3-5句内。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I hope to become a photographer one day, so I always take many photos on each trip. For example, I like photographing mountains and rivers because their shapes and colours change with the light, which makes each picture unique.

Sugestão: 答案要更直接并使用恰当时态与连词。先明确偏好（urban/rural），再给出具体原因和举例。避免重复词汇（如“there will, there will”），并把口语填充词（uh, you know）减少。控制句子长度，保持逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas. I grew up in the city, so rural landscapes feel fresh and inspiring to me; the open fields and quiet villages often produce calmer and more emotional photos. For instance, I like photographing farmers working at sunrise because the light is beautiful and tells a story.

Sugestão: 回答要更准确并注意语法与词汇使用（例如“other countries”，“since I was born”）。先直接回答，再给具体理由和预期例子，说明不同国家会带来哪些文化或视觉差异。避免未完成的句子，结尾要完整。

Exemplo: I would like to take photos in other countries. I have only travelled within China so far, but I think photographing abroad would offer different cultural scenes and architectural styles. For example, I would love to capture street markets in Southeast Asia because they have colourful foods and lively interactions that tell a story.

× Why do our beef firm of taking pictures of different views and I just want to be a photographer if I have a chance.

✓ Because I have always been fond of taking pictures of different views, and I would like to be a photographer if I have the chance.

原句句子结构混乱，出现了拼写与词序错误（如 beef, firm 等不相关词），缺少连贯的从句连接。建议按意思重写：先用原因从句 Because ... 表达喜欢拍照的原因；再用并列句表达愿望，并使用条件从句 if I have the chance。注意常用短语：be fond of + -ing，have the chance。

× So each child, each trips, I will take a lot of pictures of different sport, just like out mountains or splendid rivers.

✓ So on every trip, I will take a lot of pictures of different scenes, such as mountains or beautiful rivers.

原句存在数一致和词形错误：child 与 trips 数不匹配且不符合语境，sport 应为 scenes（场景）或景物，out mountains 拼写错误。建议使用 on every trip 或 each trip；名词复数与单数要与上下文一致；使用 such as 表示举例。

× Uh, I got, I would prefer to take pictures in a rural area because, you know, I'm a person who live in the city centres since I was born.

✓ I would prefer to take pictures in rural areas because I have lived in city centres since I was born.

原句时态不当与主谓不一致：使用表持续到现在的动作应用现在完成时 have lived，而原句用了过去式 got/混乱表达；who 后面动词应为第三人称单数形式 lives，但因为先行词是 I 的经历，改为 I have lived 更自然。注意 city centre(s) 单复数一致。

× So I'm looking forward to have a chance to take picture in regular views because I guess there will, there will be bring different emotions to me.

✓ So I'm looking forward to having a chance to take pictures of ordinary views because I guess they will bring different emotions to me.

look forward to 后应接动名词 having，而不是不定式 have；take picture 应为 take pictures（复数）；there will be bring 是错误结构，应为 they will bring 或 there will be different emotions — 两种表达任选其一。建议使用 they will bring different emotions。

× To be honest I have not been any others countries apart from China so I'm living in China since I was a bomb so maybe I have a chance.

✓ To be honest, I have not been to any other countries apart from China. I have been living in China since I was born, so maybe I will have a chance in the future.

原句有多处错误：have not been to 表示去过某地；others countries 应为 other countries；since I was a bomb 是拼写错误，应为 born，且持续到现在应使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时（have been living / have lived）；最后的推测用将来时 will have a chance 更符合语境。