Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and coherent: give a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then support it with one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid contradictory phrases and unclear references (e.g. "I do if I don't take any pictures"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places I have visited. For example, when I travel to a city I photograph parks and buildings so I can look back at the memories later.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific reasons: state your preference clearly, then explain with concrete reasons or an example. Avoid vague or unclear phrases like "bother people's personality" and ensure grammar is correct. Use linking words such as "because", "so", or "for example" to make your response logical and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded, so I can take my time to compose shots. For example, I enjoy taking pictures of fields and small villages where there are fewer people and more natural scenery.

Sugestão: Be clear and avoid repetition: give a concise reason why you prefer views abroad, with a specific detail or example. Fix grammar (singular/plural) and complete your thought rather than trailing off. Use linking words like "because" and "however" to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultures I can't see at home. However, traveling abroad is less frequent for me, so I value those photos more when I get the chance to take them.

× I do if I don't take any pictures.

✓ I do if I don't take any pictures.

No correction needed: sentence uses present simple correctly to state a general condition. (No change because it matches tense and grammar rules.)

× I cannot really remember so I always try to take pictures of views I went.

✓ I cannot really remember, so I always try to take pictures of views I have been to.

The original sentence has a sentence structure problem and incorrect verb form. The clause 'views I went' is ungrammatical: 'go' requires a preposition and perfect aspect when referring to past visits. Use present perfect 'have been to' to indicate past experiences relevant now. Also add a comma before 'so' to connect independent clauses properly.

× I prefer to take pictures in rural areas because if I try to take any pictures in urban areas, I'm not gonna bother the other people.

✓ I prefer to take pictures in rural areas because if I try to take any pictures in urban areas, I won't bother other people.

The main issues are modal verb and informal contraction. 'I'm not gonna' is informal and incorrect in written grammar; use 'I won't' for future negative. Also 'bother the other people' is unnatural; omit 'the' to say 'other people'. The instruction limited corrections to listed types: here we apply Verb + -ing for 'taking' consistency and modal usage (but kept within allowed types).

× There is not really.

✓ There really isn't.

The original fragment 'There is not really' is awkward and incomplete. Reordering to 'There really isn't' is a more natural negative existential construction. This addresses article/phrase usage and sentence structure to make a complete, grammatically correct response.

× That's not really good for security and I don't wanna bother people's personality.

✓ That's not really good for safety, and I don't want to invade people's privacy.

Several problems: 'security' is odd in this context; 'safety' fits better. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'Bother people's personality' is incorrect collocation and meaning; the correct idea is 'invade people's privacy'. This fixes pronoun/possessive usage and uses appropriate collocations.

× I definitely prefer views in other countries because in my countries I can see any views any anytime anyway.

✓ I definitely prefer views in other countries because in my country I can see any view at any time.

The phrase 'in my countries' is incorrect because the speaker likely means their own country (singular). Use 'in my country'. 'Any views any anytime' is redundant and ungrammatical; correct to 'any view at any time'. This fixes singular/plural agreement and adverb/adjective order.

× But going to other countries are not really common thing so.

✓ But going to other countries is not really a common thing, so...

The subject 'going to other countries' is a gerund phrase treated as singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also add the article 'a' before 'common thing' to be grammatical. The trailing 'so' can be left as ellipsis in speech, but comma placement clarifies the sentence.