Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tense and articles), and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific examples with linking words. For instance: say it is a hobby, mention types of subjects you photograph (animals, landscapes, historical sites), and explain why briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views; it’s one of my hobbies. For example, I often photograph animals and well-known places in Bangladesh, especially historical sites, because I like capturing their details and atmosphere.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear preference, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘buildings’), reduce hesitations, and keep sentences to a maximum of five. Mention concrete contrasts (architecture vs nature) to support your choice.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer more natural scenery. For example, my grandfather’s house in the countryside has open fields and old trees, which feel peaceful, whereas urban areas mostly show tall buildings and busy streets.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., ‘green, lush country’, ‘calm atmosphere’, ‘sandy beaches’). Provide a concise example of a place and why it’s appealing.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Bangladesh has many green, lush areas and calm beaches. For instance, places like Cox’s Bazar offer long sandy beaches and historic sites, which I find more familiar and relaxing than foreign locations.

× It was like my hobby and I like to taking pictures any of animals and many popular places.

✓ It was like my hobby, and I like taking pictures of animals and many popular places.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form. After 'like' you can use either 'to take' or 'taking'; here 'taking' fits the context. Also 'any of animals' is incorrect preposition and article usage; use 'of animals'. Remove unnecessary 'was like' or keep 'It was my hobby' for clarity.

× He's like historical places in our Bangladesh have many historical places.

✓ I mean historical places in Bangladesh; we have many historical sites.

'He's like' is an unclear contraction and misuse of pronoun; likely speaker intended 'I mean' or 'There are'. Also 'our Bangladesh' is unusual in English; use 'Bangladesh'. Repetition 'historical places have many historical places' is redundant; rephrase for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer bills in urban areas and urban areas.

✓ Yes, I prefer buildings in urban areas.

'Bills' is a wrong word choice; context suggests 'buildings'. The original repeats 'urban areas'; simplify to a single clear phrase. This is a sentence structure/word choice issue that impedes meaning.

× It can amaze training people umm, in my grandfather house and located in rural areas which umm, which can uh manage any people.

✓ It can amaze visiting people. My grandfather's house is located in a rural area, which can be managed by the local people.

The original contains fragmented clauses and fillers ('umm', 'uh'), incorrect noun forms and lacking possessive ('grandfather house' -> 'grandfather's house'). 'Amaze training people' is nonsensical; likely 'visiting people' or 'tourists'. Clarify and separate ideas into complete sentences.

× I like to live there.

✓ I like living there.

After 'like' both 'to live' and 'living' are acceptable; using 'living' is more natural here when describing preference. This is a stylistic correction for fluency.

× I can see many natural things.

✓ I can see many natural things.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but consider more natural phrasing such as 'I can see a lot of nature' or 'I can see many natural features.' No article correction required.

× I would definitely prefer based in our own country.

✓ I would definitely prefer staying in our own country.

'Prefer based in' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer staying in' or 'prefer to stay in' to express preference. 'Would' with 'prefer' is fine for hypothetical/polite preference.

× Our country is a green Lent country.

✓ Our country is a green, lush country.

'Green Lent country' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'green, lush' or 'green and fertile'. Replace 'Lent' with an appropriate adjective.

× You can see here like many natural things, they came atmosphere, nature.

✓ You can see many natural things here, such as the atmosphere and scenery.

Original mixes clauses and uses incorrect verb 'they came'. Rearranged for natural word order and corrected nouns: 'atmosphere' and 'scenery' or 'nature' as examples.

× In Silent Beach you can see many things in our country which is historical.

✓ At Cox's Bazar (a famous beach) you can see many historical places in our country.

'Silent Beach' may be a mistranslation; specify a known beach or use 'the beach' and correct relative clause: 'which are historical' or better identify historical places. Ensure noun agreement ('places... which are historical').