Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and redundant fragments, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep the answer within 3–4 concise sentences and use linking words (for example, "because" or "and"). Also finish your sentence instead of trailing off. Pronunciation and fluency will improve if you plan a short structure: statement + reason + example.

Exemplo: Yes. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture memorable moments. For example, on recent trips to the Philippines and Australia I photographed beaches and city skylines, then uploaded the best shots to social media to share with friends and family.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer first (urban or rural), then give coherent supporting details using linking words. Avoid short, disjointed sentences and unclear phrases. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., "skylines," "street life") and correct grammar ("I am used to living in urban areas"). Try to limit to 3–4 well-formed sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in Manila and enjoy the energy of city life. For instance, I like photographing skyscrapers, busy streets and colorful markets. The constant movement and lights make me feel happy and inspired.

Sugestão: Answer directly (both, or one) and explain why with specific comparisons and examples. Avoid vague or confusing phrases (e.g., "I have three countries" unclear), reduce hesitations, and correct grammar ("I have connections to the Philippines and Australia"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in both my country and other countries because each offers different attractions. For example, the Philippines has beautiful beaches and lush islands, while Australia has vast deserts and dramatic coastlines. I enjoy photographing mountains and oceans wherever I travel.

× I love, uh, taking pictures of different views and, uh, recently I've been traveling, uh, the Philippines and Australia and uh, part of my travels is umm, taking pictures and uploading it in social media and sharing it with my friends and family.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, and recently I've been traveling to the Philippines and Australia. As part of my travels, I take pictures and upload them on social media to share with my friends and family.

The original sentence mixes present simple, present perfect continuous, and awkward phrases. 'Recently I've been traveling the Philippines' is missing the preposition 'to' (preposition error but fits present tense issue because of tense/prep interaction). 'Part of my travels is taking pictures and uploading it in social media' has subject-verb and pronoun number problems and wrong preposition: use 'As part of my travels, I take pictures and upload them on social media.' Use consistent tense for habitual action (present simple) when describing what you do during travels and present perfect continuous for recent travel activity. Also use plural pronoun 'them' for 'pictures'. Note: add commas to improve clarity.

× In Manila so I'm used to living an urban places and also I love the city.

✓ In Manila, I'm used to living in urban places, and I also love the city.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'an' before the plural noun 'places' and omits the preposition 'in'. This is an article/word choice error: use 'in urban places' without 'an'. Also add comma and 'I also' for fluency.

× I consider myself as a city boy.

✓ I consider myself a city boy.

'Consider myself as' is nonstandard here; the correct structure is 'consider myself a ...' Removing 'as' yields a natural English expression.

× The busy St. of the city knows me feel happy and it's like song in my ears.

✓ The busy streets of the city make me feel happy; it's like music to my ears.

Multiple issues: 'St.' is an abbreviation inappropriate here and 'streets' should be plural (singular/plural). 'Knows me feel happy' is ungrammatical—use 'make me feel happy' (verb agreement and correct verb choice). 'It's like song in my ears' should be 'like music to my ears' (idiomatic expression). This correction fixes noun plurality, verb usage, and uses the idiom correctly.

× You know nothing.

✓ You know, nothing beats that feeling.

The original brief sentence 'You know nothing.' is likely unintended and confusing in context. To convey the intended meaning—emphasizing the feeling—the corrected sentence supplies a natural structure. This changes sentence structure to be meaningful and context-appropriate.

× Well, that question is actually very, uh, especially it resonates with me because I have three countries.

✓ Well, that question actually especially resonates with me because I have ties to three countries.

'I have three countries' is ungrammatical; people 'have ties to' or 'have citizenship in' countries. Also word order 'actually very, uh, especially it resonates' is wrong. This correction fixes article/phrase usage and creates a clear meaning.

× I have Filipino, Australian and the Philippines nature is a highlight and in Australia it's also a highlight.

✓ Filipino and Australian nature are highlights: the Philippines has beautiful natural scenery, and Australia does too.

Original mixes noun forms and pronouns awkwardly: 'I have Filipino, Australian and the Philippines nature' is unclear. Use plural subject 'nature are highlights' or restructure to two clauses. Clarifies meaning and fixes pronoun/noun form misuse.

× So both of them. So I left mountains, oceans, and also I love major tripping.

✓ So I like both. I love mountains and oceans, and I also enjoy major trips.

'So both of them' is a fragment; 'I left mountains' uses wrong past tense 'left' instead of 'like' or 'love'. 'Major tripping' is nonstandard; use 'major trips' or 'long trips'. This correction fixes tense and gerund/nominalization usage and turns fragments into complete sentences.