Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. 'a vividly vivid', 'refreshments', 'braining'). Use correct collocations (e.g. 'take photos', 'refreshing'). Aim for 2–4 sentences, and check grammar (verb forms, articles).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of interesting scenes. For example, when I see a colorful market or a dramatic sunset, I take a few pictures to remember the moment and because it feels refreshing. Sometimes I photograph rainy streets too, as the reflections make the scene more atmospheric.

Sugestão: Provide a clear preference and justify it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, while, however) and correct vocabulary (e.g. 'urban areas', 'rural areas', 'parks', 'architecture'). Avoid unclear phrases ('bar rural areas', 'something specials which is very made'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and fix grammar (articles, verb forms).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer interesting architecture, parks and lively street scenes. While rural areas have peaceful green landscapes, I enjoy the variety and man-made details I can photograph in urban settings.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and support it with two specific examples and a reason. Avoid filler words (uh) and vague phrases ('sharp path', 'rather good'). Use precise expressions ('my country has many attractive places such as...') and correct grammar (there are, if I want to go). Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because there are many attractive places to visit. For instance, Jafflong and St. X have stunning landscapes and unique cultural scenes, so I usually choose to explore domestic destinations first.

× But whenever I see like interesting things in front of me, at that moment I try to capture some couple of pictures which is give me a vividly vivid, like I feel like it's a vivid and I also it gives me a refreshments and sometimes when I feel like there is braining around me, I just capture.

✓ But whenever I see interesting things in front of me, I try to capture a couple of pictures that give me vivid memories, and they refresh me; sometimes when I feel that there is rain around me, I just take photos.

Errors involve incorrect verb forms and noun phrases: 'capture some couple of pictures' should be 'capture a couple of pictures' (quantifier and word order). 'which is give' mixes relative clause and verb form; use 'that give' with plural noun. 'vividly vivid' is redundant and wrong form; use 'vivid memories' or 'vivid images'. 'it gives me a refreshments' uses wrong article and noun form; use 'they refresh me' or 'they give me refreshment'. 'there is braining' uses a nonstandard verb form; use 'there is rain' or 'it is raining'. Also 'capture' for photos is acceptable but 'take photos' is more natural. Suggestion: simplify clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct -ing forms for progressive (it is raining) and correct noun forms and quantifiers.

× In my opinion I prefer urban areas views or bar rural areas views because of rural areas look like just all surroundings like large green areas and where we can found urban areas a park or a stage or something specials which is very made.

✓ In my opinion I prefer views of urban areas rather than rural ones because rural areas consist mostly of large green surroundings, while in urban areas we can find parks, stages, or other special places that are well built.

Problems with prepositions and word choice: 'urban areas views' should be 'views of urban areas'; use 'rather than' instead of 'or bar'. 'because of rural areas look like' is incorrect structure; use 'because rural areas consist mostly of'. 'where we can found' uses wrong verb form; use 'find'. 'something specials which is very made' is ungrammatical; use 'other special places that are well built' or 'man-made'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('of', 'in'), correct verbs ('find'), and clearer comparative connector ('rather than'). Ensure noun forms ('ones' for 'rural ones').

× Uh, from my perspective, I prefer my own country's views because, uh, there has so many attractive places like, uh, Jafflong, St. ****** and, uh, uh, sharp path or rather good and so on.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer my own country's views because there are so many attractive places like Jafflong, St. ******, and Sharp Path, which are very nice, and so on.

'there has so many attractive places' uses incorrect impersonal construction; use 'there are so many attractive places'. Capitalization and punctuation of place names corrected. 'sharp path or rather good' is unclear; replace with 'Sharp Path, which are very nice'. Suggestion: use 'there is/are' correctly for existence, ensure plural agreement with 'places', and clarify place descriptions with relative clauses.

× And this type of places like more gorgeous and beautiful, uh, if people, if I want to go to.

✓ These types of places are more gorgeous and beautiful, and I would like to visit them.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical: 'And this type of places like more gorgeous' mixes 'type' (singular) with 'places' (plural) and misuses 'like'. Also the conditional 'if people, if I want to go to' is incomplete. Correction uses plural 'These types of places' or 'These places' and a complete clause 'I would like to visit them.' Suggestion: keep subject and verb agreement, avoid incomplete conditional fragments, and use a clear main clause to express intention.