Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and shows enthusiasm, but it contains repetition, some informal phrasing and minor grammar issues. Aim to give a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating verbs (take, I took), and use slightly more natural linking phrases. Keep it within 2–4 concise sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., 'photograph' instead of 'take pictures').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. When I visit parks, I often photograph flowers, trees and birds because I find capturing nature calming and satisfying. For example, I like focusing on close-up shots of blossoms to highlight their colours and details.

Sugestão: Good clear opinion with reasons. Improve by correcting minor grammar (e.g., 'natural scenery' singular, 'city landscapes' -> 'city landscape' or 'urban scenes'), and add a linking word to connect points. Use one or two specific examples to make it more vivid.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the quietness and fresh air, as well as the green fields and natural scenery. For example, I like walking along country lanes at sunrise when the light makes the fields look golden.

Sugestão: Strong, personal response with a clear reason and an example. Improve by combining sentences to avoid slight repetition (e.g., 'love' used twice) and add a linking phrase for coherence. You could also mention a specific place name to be more concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel at home and connected to my culture, so they mean more to me. For example, I often watch the sunset over the mountains near my hometown, where the colours are breathtaking and the air smells of wildflowers.

× I actually do because when I go to parks I take, I took pictures of flowers, trees, grass and birds and I think this is quite satisfying and fascinating 'cause it's kind of my interest and hobby.

✓ I actually do, because when I go to parks I take pictures of flowers, trees, grass, and birds, and I think it is quite satisfying and fascinating because it's my interest and hobby.

Error: unnecessary tense shift and awkward phrasing. The student switches from present simple 'I take' to past 'I took' in the same clause, which is inconsistent. Also the contraction ' 'cause' is informal and 'it's kind of my interest and hobby' is awkward. Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual action ('I take'), remove the past 'I took', use 'because' instead of ' 'cause', and simplify phrase to 'it's my interest and hobby' or 'it's one of my hobbies'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 10 identifies present participle issues but the core issue here is inconsistent tense and awkward phrasing; correction follows the allowed list by addressing present participle/verb form usage.)

× I personally prefer rural views because I enjoy the quietness, fresh air, green fields and natural sceneries more than a busy city landscapes.

✓ I personally prefer rural views because I enjoy the quietness, fresh air, green fields, and natural scenery more than busy city landscapes.

Error: 'natural sceneries' is incorrect—'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use 'scenery' not 'sceneries'. Also phrase 'a busy city landscapes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'landscapes'. Suggestion: remove the article and use plural consistently ('busy city landscapes'), and use 'scenery' as uncountable. Add Oxford comma for clarity. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)

× I prefer the views in my own country because they make me feel at home and connected to my culture.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because they make me feel at home and help me feel connected to my culture.

Error: sentence is grammatically acceptable but 'make me feel at home and connected to my culture' is slightly awkward in rhythm. To improve clarity and parallelism, add a verb 'help me feel' to match 'make me feel'. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure by using verbs with similar forms ('make me feel... and help me feel...'). (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× The landscapes here are very scenic and often breathtaking.

✓ The landscapes here are very scenic and often breathtaking.

No grammatical error; sentence is correct. Noting present participle 'breathtaking' is used correctly as an adjective. No change needed. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 10)

× For example, I love watching the sunset over the mountains near my hometown and love to smell the flowers.

✓ For example, I love watching the sunset over the mountains near my hometown and smelling the flowers.

Error: parallelism problem—mixing 'I love watching' with 'and love to smell' is repetitive. Better to use parallel gerunds ('watching' and 'smelling') or repeat the verb 'love'. Suggestion: use 'I love watching... and smelling...' or 'I love watching... and I also love smelling...'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)