Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, độ chính xác từ vựng và rõ ràng logic. Tránh lỗi cấu trúc như “it's half me” và dùng danh từ/cụm danh từ đúng (ví dụ “beautiful scenery” thay vì “beauty scenery”). Viết câu chủ đề trực tiếp và ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể với liên từ phù hợp (e.g. “for example”, “when”).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memorable moments and beautiful scenery. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes, especially at sunrise, because the light makes the colors more vivid.

Sugestão: Chỉnh một vài từ vựng và trật tự để câu tự nhiên hơn; dùng danh từ số ít/phrasal forms đúng (“greenery” hoặc “green spaces” rather than “greeneries”). Thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ để làm câu đầy đủ và thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscape and green spaces help me relax and reduce stress. For example, I like walking by rice fields or lakes where the quiet atmosphere is soothing.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng: loại bỏ lỗi như “my our country” và sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự logic. Thêm liên từ để nối ý, giải thích cụ thể những điều khiến bạn thích (ví dụ: cảnh nông thôn, kiến trúc truyền thống). Tránh câu rời rạc như “Farming example…”.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of home and cultural familiarity. For example, seeing traditional houses and familiar farmland makes me feel connected to my family and childhood memories.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it's half me capture memorable moments and beauty scenery.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments and beautiful scenery.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'it's half me' is incorrect — the intended meaning is 'it helps me' (verb issue). 'Beauty scenery' uses the adjective form incorrectly; the correct adjective is 'beautiful'. This falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure. Suggestion: replace 'it's half me' with 'it helps me' and use the adjective 'beautiful' before 'scenery'.

× For example, when I travel I photograph landscape so.

✓ For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes.

The phrase 'photograph landscape so' is ungrammatical. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' when speaking generally, and 'so' is unnecessary. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue. Suggestion: remove 'so' and pluralize 'landscape' to 'landscapes'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscape and greeneries help me relax and reduce stress.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery help me relax and reduce stress.

The word 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' when referring to more than one scene. 'Greeneries' is not a standard plural noun; the correct uncountable noun is 'greenery'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers/nouns. Suggestion: use 'landscapes' and 'greenery'.

× I prefer views in my our country because they remind me of home and cultural familiarity.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of home and cultural familiarity.

The phrase 'my our country' mixes two possessive determiners; only one should be used. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/determiners. Suggestion: use 'my own country' or simply 'my country'.

× Farming example seeing familiar landscape and traditional architectures give.

✓ For example, seeing familiar landscapes and traditional architecture is comforting.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb agreement and uses 'architectures' incorrectly; 'architecture' is usually uncountable when referring to style or buildings collectively. This is a sentence structure and noun form issue. Suggestion: begin with 'For example,' use plural 'landscapes' if appropriate, and use 'architecture' as uncountable; provide a verb like 'is comforting' to complete the sentence.