Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, add a brief reason or example, and avoid redundancy. Keep it under five sentences. Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to capture changing colors and light.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and word choice (singular/plural, noun phrases), use a linking word to connect reason, and give a specific example to make the answer more vivid and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I can capture natural beauty and peaceful landscapes. For instance, I like photographing rolling hills and rivers at dawn since the soft light creates a calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly (choose one) and avoid starting with 'Yes' when the question asks preference. Correct grammar and be specific about what you can photograph. Use linking words and a short example.

Exemplo: I prefer taking pictures in my own country because it has diverse landscapes like forests, mountains and coastal areas to photograph. For example, I often shoot the mangrove forests and seaside cliffs near my hometown because they offer dramatic textures and colors.

× Yes, I'd love to take the picture of different view.

✓ Yes, I'd love to take pictures of different views.

The speaker used definite article 'the' and singular nouns incorrectly. When speaking generally about taking photos, use plural 'pictures' and plural 'views' without 'the' to indicate variety. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements (take pictures of different views).

× I prefer taking picture in rural areas because I can capture the natural beauties which makes me feel so good.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I can capture natural beauty, which makes me feel good.

Multiple issues: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (article errors/singular-plural). 'The natural beauties' is unnatural; use 'natural beauty' (uncountable) or 'natural beauties' is rarely used. Also relative clause subject-verb agreement: 'which makes' refers to 'capturing natural beauty' or 'natural beauty' (singular) so 'which makes' is acceptable; keep 'which makes me feel good.' Remove extra 'so' for concision. Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' and the noun phrase 'natural beauty.'

× Yes, I love to take a picture in my own country and because my country is full of natural resources and there is lots of things that I can capture.

✓ Yes, I love to take pictures in my own country because it is full of natural resources and there are lots of things I can capture.

Several grammar points: 'a picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general preference. Remove redundant 'and' before 'because.' Use 'it is' instead of repeating 'my country' for concision. 'There is lots of things' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and count noun usage; use 'there are lots of things' or 'there are many things.' Also remove unnecessary 'that' after 'things.' Suggestion: use 'there are many things I can capture' and plural 'pictures.'