Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer, correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix tense and word choice (e.g., 'capturing' instead of 'capitaling', 'spent' instead of 'spend'), and complete examples so they are meaningful.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos when I travel because I enjoy capturing landscapes such as mountains and rivers, and also interesting city scenes. For example, on my last trip I spent an afternoon photographing an old fishing village, focusing on its colorful boats and riverside houses.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with one clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Correct repetitions and grammar (e.g., 'it gives' rather than 'it it gives', 'taking pictures of them' rather than 'there'). Use natural phrases like 'peaceful atmosphere' instead of 'some chill.'

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have a peaceful atmosphere and fresher air. For example, traditional houses and quiet country lanes often look more picturesque, so I enjoy taking photos of old houses and fields when I travel.

Sugestão: Make the response more fluid and provide a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid trailing words like 'Yes' at the end. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'experience new cultures and scenery').

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I like experiencing different cultures and landscapes. For example, seeing architecture and natural scenery that are unfamiliar at home helps me take more diverse and interesting photographs.

× I enjoy capitaling landscapes like mountains and rivers and interesting city scenes.

✓ I enjoy capturing landscapes like mountains and rivers and interesting city scenes.

The student used 'capitaling', which is not a correct verb. The intended verb is 'capture' (present participle 'capturing') to mean taking photos. Replace incorrect word with the correct verb form to convey the action of taking pictures. Suggestion: use 'capture' or 'capturing' when describing photographing scenes.

× For example, on my last trip I spend an afternoon photographing the old.

✓ For example, on my last trip I spent an afternoon photographing the old town.

The sentence uses present tense 'spend' but refers to a past event 'on my last trip'; the verb should be in the past tense 'spent'. Also 'the old' is incomplete; adding a noun such as 'town' completes the idea. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference and ensure objects are complete.

× I will go with the with the rural area because of the old school vibe it it gives the natural the fresh air.

✓ I will go with the rural area because of the old-school vibe it gives and the natural, fresh air.

The sentence has repetition 'the with the' and doubled 'it it', plus awkward noun phrases. The future tense 'I will go with' is acceptable for preference, but wording and punctuation must be fixed. 'Old-school' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Use 'gives' to link 'it' to what it provides, and combine 'natural' and 'fresh air' with a comma. Suggestion: remove duplicates, fix hyphenation, and connect ideas with proper conjunctions.

× The traditional houses for example.

✓ For example, the traditional houses are appealing to me.

The original fragment lacks a verb and is therefore a sentence structure error; here it's treated as needing a complete clause. Adding 'are appealing to me' completes the thought. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by including a verb or attaching the phrase to the previous sentence.

× I love seeing the old houses taking picture of there it gives some chill.

✓ I love seeing the old houses and taking pictures of them; they give a relaxed feeling.

Multiple problems: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'; 'of there' is incorrect preposition/pronoun—use 'of them' or 'of the houses'; 'it gives some chill' is unnatural in English; better phrasing is 'they give a relaxed feeling' or 'they feel chill'. Suggestion: use correct object pronouns, pluralize countable nouns when needed, and choose natural English expressions for feelings.

× I would prefer views from other countries to have a different experience from what I'm already used to back home.

✓ I would prefer views from other countries to have a different experience than what I'm already used to back home.

The sentence is mostly correct but improves by using 'than' for comparisons instead of 'from'. 'Prefer... to' can be followed by 'than' to compare experiences. Suggestion: use 'than' after comparative structures and maintain tense consistency with 'I'm already used to'.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I would.

The brief 'Yes.' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech but to clearly respond to the question it is better to use a complete short answer like 'Yes, I would.' This provides clarity and matches the modal 'would prefer' used in the prior sentence. Suggestion: use fuller short answers in speaking to show complete agreement.