Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I like taking pictures'), avoid redundancy, and keep answers concise (maximum 4–5 sentences). Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Pronunciation and word choice also need attention (e.g., 'memories' not 'memorize', 'record them to look back on' instead of 'when I order').

Exemplo: I like taking photographs of different views, especially when I travel, because photos freeze beautiful moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and local architecture so I can look back at the trip later.

Sugestão: Improve coherence and vocabulary, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words (e.g., 'oven oils and Roux oils' makes no sense). Use linking words (for instance, 'however', 'for example') and be specific: name features you like in urban vs rural areas. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Exemplo: I usually prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. However, in some cities I enjoy photographing landmarks; for example, in Los Angeles I like city skylines, while in Japan I prefer photographing cherry blossoms in the countryside.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and correct factual or word-choice errors. Start with a clear statement ('I prefer views in my own country') and support it with specific, accurate examples. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'vast landscapes' not 'spaces learned'), avoid repetition, and mention specific regions and what they offer. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to structure the answer.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, China, because it has vast and varied landscapes. For example, I can visit Harbin for summer festivals, Yunnan for ethnic minority villages, and coastal areas for beaches, so there is always something different to see.

× I do like take a picture of different views especially when I travel because I think take picture can freeze a beautiful moment and I can record them when I order.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel, because I think taking pictures can freeze a beautiful moment and I can record them when I return.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form 'taking' not the base form 'take'. Similarly, 'think take picture' needs 'taking pictures'. Also use plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos. 'Order' seems incorrect in context; 'return' fits meaning of recording memories after the trip. Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures' and 'taking pictures can freeze' and 'when I return.'

× It's very beautiful way to record your memorize and I love to take many pictures.

✓ It's a very beautiful way to record your memories and I love to take many pictures.

Missing article 'a' before 'very beautiful way' (article error, but primarily adjective phrase structure). 'Memorize' is a verb; the correct noun is 'memories'. Use plural 'memories' for recollections. Suggestion: say 'It's a very beautiful way to record your memories.'

× After I both like oven oils and Roux oils.

✓ Actually, I like both urban areas and rural areas.

The original sentence is unintelligible due to wrong words and word order. 'Oven oils and Roux oils' are incorrect words; likely intended 'urban' and 'rural'. Begin with a discourse marker like 'Actually' or 'Well' if clarifying. Suggestion: 'I like both urban areas and rural areas.'

× It depends on different country I will travel because different country is really long for different views.

✓ It depends on the country I travel to because each country offers different kinds of views.

Problems: missing preposition 'to' after 'travel', incorrect singular/plural and awkward phrasing 'different country is really long for different views'. Better: 'It depends on the country I travel to' and 'each country offers different kinds of views.' Suggestion: use 'country I travel to' and 'each country offers.'

× If I go to Los Angeles, I prefer to say the capital building, the sky capital buildings.

✓ If I go to Los Angeles, I prefer to see the skyscrapers and famous buildings.

'Prefer to say' is incorrect; use 'prefer to see'. 'Capital building' is wrong for Los Angeles (which is not the capital) and 'sky capital buildings' seems to attempt 'skyscrapers'. Use 'skyscrapers' or 'famous buildings'. Suggestion: 'prefer to see the skyscrapers and famous buildings.'

× If I go to Japan, I would like enjoying the cherry blossoming.

✓ If I go to Japan, I would like to enjoy the cherry blossoms blooming.

After 'would like' use the infinitive 'to enjoy', not the -ing form. 'Cherry blossoming' is awkward; use 'cherry blossoms blooming' or simply 'seeing cherry blossoms.' Suggestion: 'I would like to enjoy the cherry blossoms.'

× So I prefer to choose the rural views.

✓ So I prefer rural views.

'Prefer to choose the rural views' is wordy and awkward. Use 'prefer rural views' or 'prefer to choose rural views.' Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer rural views.'

× I prefer the views in my own country, China, because China has spaces learned, so I can experience different geological culture in different various different geological location.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country, China, because China has wide open spaces, so I can experience different regional cultures in many different locations.

Multiple issues: 'spaces learned' incorrect—intended 'wide open spaces'. Tense is present and acceptable but word choice and redundancy ('different various different') are wrong. 'Geological culture' is incorrect; likely 'regional' or 'ethnic culture'. Use 'regional cultures' and 'many different locations.' Suggestion: 'China has wide open spaces' and 'experience different regional cultures.'

× And if I want to experience minor ethnic culture, I can go to Vienna and if I want to enjoy in the summer, I can go to Harbin.

✓ If I want to experience minority ethnic cultures, I can visit Yunnan, and if I want to enjoy summer festivals, I can go to Harbin.

'Minor ethnic culture' should be 'minority ethnic cultures' (plural and 'minority' not 'minor'). 'Go to Vienna' is incorrect example for China; likely intended a Chinese region such as Yunnan. 'Enjoy in the summer' is vague; suggest 'enjoy summer festivals' or 'enjoy warm weather in summer.' Suggestion: use correct noun 'minority ethnic cultures' and appropriate place names.

× There are so many choices I can choose, so I love China.

✓ There are so many places to choose from, so I love China.

Redundant phrasing 'choices I can choose' should be avoided. Use 'places to choose from' or 'choices' alone. Suggestion: 'There are so many places to choose from.'