Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitation and finish thoughts more clearly. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and incomplete endings. Also keep it within 3–4 concise sentences to be natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, when I visit historical sites I focus on architectural details and unusual angles to show texture and scale. I also try to capture the atmosphere by photographing during golden hour, which gives the buildings a warm, dramatic look.

Sugestão: Make the main point clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, so, for example) appropriately and give specific supporting details (what you do, how it feels). Reduce grammatical errors and finish sentences completely.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I’ve lived in a city for many years and need a break from the noise and crowds. For example, when I visit the countryside I enjoy walking along quiet trails and breathing fresh air, which helps me relax and think more clearly.

Sugestão: Avoid long hesitations and correct small errors (e.g., 'lies' should be 'that’s'). Give a clear topic sentence then support it with specific comparisons and reasons. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'roles and building' unclear — say 'rows of historic buildings' or 'old town streets'). Keep to 3–4 coherent sentences.

Exemplo: That’s an interesting question; I like both domestic and foreign views. My country has familiar landscapes I appreciate, but I also enjoy exploring Europe because I love the rows of historic buildings and narrow streets, which feel very different from home. Visiting new places helps me learn about different architectures and cultures.

× When I travel, I like to capture different types of views.

✓ When I travel, I like to capture different kinds of views.

'Types of views' is not incorrect but 'kinds of views' sounds more natural in this context; this is a sentence-level style improvement to make the phrase more idiomatic.

× For example, when I visit historical places, uh, I take photos that highlight the architectural details, like a special angle, umm, so that, uh, when I get back home.

✓ For example, when I visit historical places, I take photos that highlight architectural details from special angles so that I can remember them when I get back home.

The original sentence is incomplete and disfluent due to filler words and missing clause completion. Remove fillers, make clauses explicit ('from special angles') and add 'I can remember them' to complete the purpose clause. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× So that's reason why I I like to escape from a from the busy city.

✓ So that's the reason why I like to escape from the busy city.

The original has repetition ('I I'), an incorrect determiner ('a from the busy city'), and missing article 'the' before 'reason'. Correct the article use and remove duplicated words for grammaticality and fluency.

× If I have a free time, for example, when I visit the rural areas, I like to walk along with the fresh air and it help.

✓ If I have free time, for example when I visit rural areas, I like to walk and enjoy the fresh air because it helps me relax.

'A free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is uncountable so no article. 'The rural areas' is overly specific; use 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'. 'Walk along with the fresh air' is unidiomatic; use 'walk and enjoy the fresh air'. 'It help' has wrong verb form and missing subject relation; use 'it helps me relax' to complete the meaning.

× Well, lies an interesting question.

✓ Well, that's an interesting question.

'lies an interesting question' is ungrammatical here. Use a demonstrative 'that's' to refer to the question. This fixes sentence structure and makes the response natural.

× I would say I like both definitely.

✓ I would say I definitely like both.

Word order is slightly awkward. Moving 'definitely' before the verb phrase produces a more natural adverb placement in spoken English.

× I like the scenery in my country.

✓ I like the scenery in my country.

This sentence is correct. No change needed; 'the scenery' and 'my country' are used appropriately.

× Umm, but when time goes on, uh, I, I want to uh, experience different views, for example, uh, I like a European countries view so much umm like, like roles and building are special to me.

✓ But as time goes on, I want to experience different views. For example, I really like the views in European countries; the roads and buildings are special to me.

Original contains disfluencies, incorrect article use ('a European countries view'), and singular/plural mismatches ('roles' should be 'roads', 'building' should be 'buildings'). 'When time goes on' is better as 'as time goes on'. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct pluralization and articles.