Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: حاول تنظيم الإجابة بمقدمة قصيرة متبوعة بتفاصيل محددة وباستخدام تراكيب وصِفية أكثر دقة. تجنّب الأخطاء النحوية البسيطة (مثل استخدام 'a person' و'for different views' و'adoring' بدلاً من 'adore to do it')، وقلّل التكرار (مثل تكرار 'actually' و'adore'). استخدم رابطاً واحداً أو جملتين داعمتين لا تزيد الإجابة عن 5 جمل. مثال على تحسين النقاط: بيان واضح للمفضّل، سبب محدد مع وصف، ثم جملة ختامية قصيرة.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially landscapes and skies. I am particularly drawn to sunrises and sunsets because the colours change so dramatically at those times. Clouds often create interesting textures and moods in my photos, which makes them my favourite subject to capture.

Sugestão: صحح الأخطاء اللفظية واللغوية وابدأ بجملة موضوعية واضحة مثل 'I prefer rural areas.' قدّم سببين محددين مرتبطين بالحواس أو بالمزاج واستخدم روابط بسيطة (because, so, and). تجنّب التردّد والكلمات المحشوة ('umm', 'uh') وصحح الكلمات الخاطئة ('abuse' -> 'about' or 'areas' and 'noising' -> 'noise'). حافظ على درجة اللغة الطبيعية والاقتصاد في الجمل.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I live in the countryside near mountains. The scenery there is more beautiful and peaceful, which helps me relax. Also, rural places are much quieter than cities, so I can focus on taking photos without distractions.

Sugestão: استخدم جملة افتتاحية مباشرة وصياغة أوضح للسبب (مثلاً 'I prefer views in other countries because...'). تجنّب الجمل الغامضة مثل 'it's worth documenting' و'used to see'؛ بدّلها بتفاصيل محددة مثل أمثلة عن مناظر أو ثقافات مختلفة. اربط الأفكار بكلمات انتقالية (for example, also, therefore) ولا تكرر الكلمات غير الضرورية أو الكلمات المملوءة ('umm').

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural scenes I haven't seen before. For example, visiting a coastal town in another country might reveal different architecture and colours compared to home. Exploring abroad also gives me fresh perspectives and inspiration for my photography.

× Yes, actually I'm person who adore taking pictures for different views such as landscape and skies, sunrise, also the sunset and the clouds.

✓ Yes, actually I'm a person who adores taking pictures of different views such as landscapes and skies, sunrises, sunsets, and clouds.

You missed the article 'a' before 'person' and used the base verb 'adore' with the subject 'I' in a relative clause that requires third person singular agreement for 'who' referring to 'person' (adopts third-person form 'adores'). Use plural forms for countable nouns when speaking generally ('landscapes', 'skies', 'sunrises', 'sunsets'). Use the preposition 'of' with 'taking pictures' rather than 'for'. Suggestion: add the indefinite article, change verb to 'adores', pluralize the nouns and use 'of'.

× Actually the clouds and sunset time is the most beautiful thing for me so I adore to do it.

✓ Actually, clouds and sunset time are the most beautiful things to me, so I love doing that.

Subject-verb agreement: 'clouds and sunset time' is a compound subject and requires the plural verb 'are' (Grammar problem type 27 applies but the error stems from number and verb). 'The most beautiful thing' should be plural 'things' to match the compound subject. 'Adore to do' is incorrect collocation; after 'adore' or 'love' use the gerund form 'doing' when describing an activity. Suggestion: use plural verb, plural noun, and gerund.

× Umm, I prefer abuse in rural areas because actually I live in a countryside and, and in the mountains.

✓ Umm, I prefer being in rural areas because I actually live in the countryside and in the mountains.

The word 'abuse' is incorrect and likely a misselection for 'being' or 'staying'. Use the expression 'live in the countryside' (no article 'a' before 'countryside'). 'In the countryside' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: replace 'abuse' with 'being', remove 'a' before 'countryside', and keep 'in the mountains'.

× So these views in my town is beautiful and they give me the peaceful, the relaxation.

✓ So the views in my town are beautiful and they give me peace and relaxation.

Subject-verb agreement: 'views' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' (Grammar problem type 27). 'the peaceful, the relaxation' is incorrect phrasing; use uncountable nouns 'peace' and 'relaxation' without definite articles. Suggestion: use 'are' for plural subject and the nouns 'peace and relaxation'.

× And also, uh, it's umm, far away from noising.

✓ And also, uh, it's, umm, far away from noise.

'Noising' is not a correct noun; the correct noun is 'noise'. Use 'far away from noise' to indicate distance from noisy environments. Suggestion: replace 'noising' with 'noise'.

× Of course, in another country, because umm, I can't discover many things and also it's worth documenting My country is something that I used to see.

✓ Of course, in another country, because I can discover many new things and it's worth documenting; my country is something I am used to seeing.

Use 'can' instead of 'can't' to express ability to discover in other countries (original likely intended positive). 'Discover many things' should include 'new' to clarify novelty. Run-on sentence: add punctuation and correct tense 'used to see' -> 'used to seeing' or 'am used to seeing'; here 'am used to seeing' or 'I am used to seeing' is clearer. Suggestion: change modal to 'can' if intention is positive, add 'new', and fix 'used to' phrase to 'am used to seeing'.

× So in another country it umm, helps me to discover different people, different views, also different feelings inside me.

✓ So in another country, it helps me discover different people, different views, and different feelings inside me.

Unnecessary filler words disrupt sentence flow; remove them for clarity. Use 'helps me discover' without 'to' after 'helps'. Use commas and 'and' correctly in a list. Suggestion: remove 'umm' and extra comma, use 'helps me discover' and join items with 'and'.