Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, I like to, because repeated). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos to preserve special moments and to remember specific places; for example, I photograph sunsets so I can look back on the colours and atmosphere later.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear preference sentence and give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar: say "prefer rural areas" and use nouns/phrases correctly (calm and quiet, traffic noise). Avoid unfinished endings.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are calm and quiet. For instance, there is less traffic and fewer people, so I can enjoy natural scenes and hear birdsong, which helps me relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a specific reason with an example. Use correct verb forms (prefer views in my own country) and avoid repetition. Mention a clear example of a familiar place or convenience of knowing locations.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know where the best spots are and can visit them easily. For example, I often go to a nearby mountain viewpoint that I know well, so I can plan trips without searching for new places.

× Yes, I like to, I like to taking pictures because when I see the nice scenery, I want to take a picture because I want to remember that memories about the scenery because, uh, when the time is go, I want to remember that scenery.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures because when I see nice scenery, I want to take a picture to remember the scenery, because when time passes, I want to remember it.

The student used the infinitive 'to taking' which is incorrect; after 'like' the form should be either the infinitive 'to take' or the gerund 'taking' without 'to'. Also there are extra words and tense problems: 'that memories' is incorrect plurality and word choice; 'when the time is go' is ungrammatical — use 'when time passes'. Suggestions: use 'I like to take pictures' or 'I like taking pictures'. Remove redundant phrases and choose correct singular/plural nouns ('memories' vs 'memory') and correct verb forms ('time passes').

× I, I prefer to rural areas because, uh, rural areas are very calm and silent, because if I, if I live in the urban area, there are many cars and many people and so many loud noise. So yeah, I don't.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are very calm and quiet. If I lived in an urban area, there would be many cars, many people, and a lot of noise, so I wouldn't.

Errors: 'prefer to rural areas' wrongly uses 'to' — the verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun or 'prefer to live in'. 'Silent' is a less appropriate adjective for places; 'quiet' is better. 'If I live' should be the conditional 'if I lived' to match the hypothetical result with 'would'. 'So many loud noise' mixes quantifier and uncountable noun; use 'a lot of noise' or 'so much noise'. The final 'So yeah, I don't.' is incomplete; 'I wouldn't' completes the idea. Suggestions: remove incorrect preposition, use correct conditional, and choose appropriate quantifiers and adjectives.

× I prefer to watch the views of my own country because I know lots of places to go and where is the nice view in in my country. So yeah, I can choose when I want to see the view and, and and I go to.

✓ I prefer to see the views of my own country because I know many places to go and where the nice views are in my country. So I can choose when I want to see them and go there.

Problems: 'prefer to watch the views' — 'watch' is not the ideal verb for scenery; 'see' or 'visit' is better. 'Where is the nice view in in my country' incorrectly uses question word order in a statement and duplicates 'in'. Use 'where the nice views are'. 'I can choose when I want to see the view and, and and I go to' is ungrammatical and repetitive; use 'I can choose when I want to see them and go there.' Suggestions: use correct verb for scenery, correct word order for embedded clauses, remove repeated words, and use appropriate pronouns ('them', 'there').