Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Definitely I liked you 'cause as I am a photographer, I think taking pictures of different view can improve my skills.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
Certainly rural areas because I think it is more modern and more convenient. I think it can show the high technology of a city. So I like to taking pictures of rural areas.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I prefer views in other countries because there are different kind of views in different countries and I think in other country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要直接且语法正确,避免与考官产生不相关的表述(例如“liked you”)。开头应有主题句,然后用一到两个具体细节支持。注意动词时态与数的一致性,句子不宜过长或冗余。可练习用简单清晰的句子表达职业相关的理由并给出具体例子。
Exemplo: Yes, I do. As a photographer, I enjoy capturing different views because it helps me improve my composition and lighting skills. For example, photographing a coastline taught me how to balance foreground and background elements.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 25.0Sugestão: 答案与问题不符且自相矛盾(把农村描述为“更现代、更方便”并能“展示城市高科技”)。应先给出明确立场(城市或农村),接着用合理、具体的理由支持,并用连接词保证逻辑连贯。注意词汇搭配(take pictures of)。
Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer varied architecture and interesting street scenes. For instance, modern buildings and busy squares provide opportunities to capture diverse light and human activity.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答重复且表达不完整。应该先明确观点,然后给出两到三个具体原因并举例,使用连接词如 “because”, “for example”, “also”。注意单复数和介词使用(kinds, in other countries)。
Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional marketplaces abroad, which have colours and activities you don't see at home.
× Definitely I liked you 'cause as I am a photographer, I think taking pictures of different view can improve my skills.
✓ Definitely I like it because, as I am a photographer, I think taking pictures of different views can improve my skills.
原句中使用過去式 “liked” 與語境不符(談現在的喜好應用現在式)。另外 “you” 用錯,應為指代拍照這件事的代詞 “it”。“view” 應為可數名詞複數形式 “views”。建議:將動詞改為現在式 “like”,把代詞改為 “it”,並將名詞改為複數。
× Certainly rural areas because I think it is more modern and more convenient.
✓ Certainly rural areas because I think they are less modern and less convenient.
原句說鄉村地區 “more modern and more convenient” 與常理不符(考生原意應為城市較現代化且便利)。此處需用複數代詞 “they” 來指代 “rural areas”。建議:依據語境改為表達相反意思並使用正確指代。
× I think it can show the high technology of a city.
✓ I think they can show the high technology of a city.
句中主語為複數 “views” 或 “pictures”,應使用複數代詞 “they” 或明確說 “these pictures”。使用單數代詞 “it” 與先行詞不一致。建議:保持代詞與先行詞數的一致性。
× So I like to taking pictures of rural areas.
✓ So I like taking pictures of rural areas.
動詞 “like” 後面若接不定式或動名詞,正確形式為 “like to take” 或 “like taking”。原句 “to taking” 為錯誤的混合形式。建議:選擇 “like taking” 或 “like to take”。
× I prefer views in other countries because there are different kind of views in different countries and I think in other country.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because there are different kinds of views in different countries, and I think in other countries are more interesting.
原句有多處錯誤:"different kind of" 應為複數 "different kinds of";最後的 "in other country" 應為複數地點表達 "in other countries" 或用完整句子補充意義;另外可加上形容詞使語意完整。建議:使用複數形式 "kinds",並將地點改為複數或重寫為完整描述。