Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tense and articles), and provide one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture memories and makes me feel relaxed. For example, when I take pictures at the beach or in a park, I focus on colors and light, which lifts my mood. If I don’t take photos for a long time, I sometimes feel down because I miss documenting special moments.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use a clear topic sentence, and give specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "however"). Avoid filler words and correct comparative structure.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer more natural scenery and quieter settings. For example, countryside fields and forests provide interesting textures and natural light, whereas urban areas can be crowded and artificial. Therefore, I usually choose rural locations for landscape photos.

Sugestão: Give a clear and grammatical topic sentence, then support it with specific examples and a brief explanation. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations, and use correct vocabulary (e.g., "one of the Seven Wonders").

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because it has many famous and unique landmarks. For instance, we have ancient monuments like the pyramids, which are considered one of the Seven Wonders of the world. These sites are close to home and very meaningful to me, so I enjoy photographing them.

× Yeah, I really love it because it's give me a nice picture with myself, make me happy and feeling was the rest.

✓ Yeah, I really love it because it gives me nice pictures of myself, makes me happy, and helps me feel rested.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and agreement. 'it's give' should be 'it gives' (third person singular present). 'make me happy' should be 'makes me happy' to agree with subject. 'feeling was the rest' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'helps me feel rested' or 'helps me rest'. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verbs for 'it' and rephrase awkward phrase into a clear clause such as 'helps me feel rested'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× In other hand, when I take when I don't take photos, I made the maybe feel a depression at.

✓ On the other hand, when I don't take photos, I sometimes feel depressed.

Errors: tense and word choice. 'I made the maybe feel a depression at' is incorrect. Use present simple 'I sometimes feel depressed' to describe a habitual or general state. Also use 'On the other hand' not 'In other hand'. Remove extra words and place adverb 'sometimes' before the main verb. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I prefer to take a photo rural areas because it's an issue of, uh, environment.

✓ I prefer to take photos in rural areas because of environmental reasons.

Errors: missing preposition 'in' before 'rural areas' and awkward phrase 'it's an issue of environment'. Use 'take photos in rural areas' and 'because of environmental reasons' or 'because of the environment'. Also plural 'photos' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, in other hand, the urban areas, it's a very good places, but maybe, uh, it's not natural that as rural area.

✓ On the other hand, urban areas are nice places, but they are not as natural as rural areas.

Errors: pronoun and article usage and agreement. 'the urban areas, it's a very good places' mixes singular 'it's' with plural 'places'—use 'urban areas are nice places'. 'it's not natural that as rural area' should be 'they are not as natural as rural areas'. Use consistent plural forms and comparative structure 'not as... as'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Uh, so I choose the rural area. It's very good.

✓ So I choose rural areas because they are more natural and I like them.

Errors: short choppy sentences and article use. 'I choose the rural area' should be 'I choose rural areas' or 'I choose the countryside'. Explain reason in one sentence to improve coherence: 'because they are more natural and I like them'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× My country absolutely because it's continuing number of amazing views, uh, such as pyramids and assembled, you know, it's amazing.

✓ Definitely my country, because it has a continuous number of amazing sights, such as the pyramids and other monuments; it's amazing.

Errors: missing verb after subject ('My country absolutely' lacks verb), incorrect word choices 'continuing number' should be 'a continuous number' or better 'so many' and 'assembled' is wrong—likely 'assemblies' or 'monuments' or 'ancient sites'. Add 'it has' to complete the sentence and use 'sights' or 'monuments'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It was one of the seven, uh, amazing, uh, present in all world.

✓ It is one of the seven wonders of the world.

Errors: wrong tense and wrong words. 'It was' can be 'It is' when referring to a timeless fact; 'present in all world' is incorrect—use the established phrase 'the seven wonders of the world'. Also unnecessary adjectives. Grammar problem type ID:13}]}}<!-- End JSON -->.viewport<meta name=