Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I love to taking picture difference views such as ocean, mountains and waterfalls are my favorite things that I love to pick take photos these things.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I think I would prefer rural areas because I love to nature and nature I and nature photos is give me peace.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
Are you prefer views on my country? Because in my country I can I can look ocean, mountains, waterfalls.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 46.0Sugestão: Make the reply grammatically correct, concise, and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one linked specific detail. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement.
Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph oceans, mountains and waterfalls because their colors and textures make for striking photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give one specific reason using linking words. Correct grammar ("I love nature", "they give me peace") and avoid repeating the same word.
Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I love nature. For instance, peaceful fields and forests help me relax and make my photos feel more natural and calm.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: Respond directly and confidently; avoid asking the examiner a question back. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail with correct grammar and no repetition. Be specific about why your country’s views appeal to you.
Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of scenery. For example, I can easily visit nearby coasts, mountains and waterfalls, so I can take many different kinds of landscape photos.
× Yes, I love to taking picture difference views such as ocean, mountains and waterfalls are my favorite things that I love to pick take photos these things.
✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, such as the ocean, mountains, and waterfalls; these are my favorite subjects to photograph.
The original uses 'to taking' which incorrectly combines 'to' + gerund; after 'love' use the gerund 'taking' or the to-infinitive 'to take'. Also 'picture difference views' has word order and noun number errors: 'different views' and plural 'pictures'. 'Pick take photos these things' is ungrammatical; 'subjects to photograph' or 'things I like to photograph' is correct. Use articles before 'ocean' and maintain parallel list with commas. (Grammar problem type ID:8)
× I think I would prefer rural areas because I love to nature and nature I and nature photos is give me peace.
✓ I think I would prefer rural areas because I love nature, and nature photographs give me peace.
'Love to nature' is incorrect; use verb + noun: 'love nature'. The repeated fragments 'nature I and nature photos' are redundant and ungrammatical. 'Nature photos is give me peace' has subject-verb agreement and wrong verb form; use 'photographs give me peace'. Also remove unnecessary 'would' is acceptable but kept; ensure plural 'photographs' matches 'give'. (Grammar problem type ID:11)
× Are you prefer views on my country? Because in my country I can I can look ocean, mountains, waterfalls.
✓ Do you mean local views in my country? In my country I can see the ocean, mountains, and waterfalls.
The question form 'Are you prefer' is incorrect; use 'Do you prefer' or rephrase. 'On my country' is wrong preposition; use 'in my country'. 'I can I can look ocean' repeats 'I can' and uses 'look' incorrectly; use 'see the ocean'. Add articles 'the' before 'ocean' and parallel list punctuation. (Grammar problem type ID:12)