Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct small grammatical errors (e.g., “every day” vs “everyday”, and remove unnecessary phrases).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of the river near my house because the light is beautiful in the morning, so I end up taking a photo almost every day and sometimes run out of iPhone storage.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitation and avoid focusing on social media approval as the main reason—mention visual variety, architecture, or atmosphere instead. Improve sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g., "urban areas", "features").

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because they offer a wide variety of scenes, such as modern architecture and busy streets. For instance, the contrast of buildings and street life creates interesting photos, and it’s fun to capture different textures and colors in the city.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then expand with a specific, coherent reason. Use correct grammar (e.g., “to take pictures”, “my own country’s views”), avoid unfinished sentences, and provide a concrete example of local places you like. You can mention future plans if relevant.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it’s more affordable and familiar. For example, I enjoy taking pictures of my neighborhood river and the small garden near my house, where seasonal changes make the scenes interesting throughout the year.

× Actually I guess every day I take a picture because of every day I have a problem with my iPhone storage 'cause my house is near to the river and when I everyday I have a some tasks.

✓ Actually, I guess I take pictures every day because I have a problem with my iPhone storage; my house is near the river and I have some tasks every day.

Errors: inconsistent singular/plural nouns and redundant words. 'a picture' should be 'pictures' to match 'every day'. 'a some tasks' is incorrect; use 'some tasks'. Remove redundant 'every day' placements. Also use 'near the river' (no 'to') and simplify sentence structure. Suggestion: decide plural vs singular based on frequency (use plural for repeated actions), avoid extra articles before 'some', and place time expressions ('every day') next to the verb.

× my house is near to the river

✓ my house is near the river

Use 'near' with the object directly; adding 'to' is incorrect in this context. Say 'near the river' or 'close to the river'.

× and when I everyday I have a some tasks

✓ and I have some tasks every day

Original has wrong word order and an extra article. Place time adverb 'every day' at the end or before the verb: 'I have some tasks every day'. Remove the extra 'a' before 'some'.

× I prefer, uh, Urban Air areas, uh, 'cause, uh, there are many, uh, aspects that I can take a picture

✓ I prefer urban areas because there are many scenes I can photograph

'Urban Air areas' is incorrect; likely intended 'urban areas'. 'Aspects that I can take a picture' is ungrammatical: use 'scenes' or 'subjects I can photograph'. Also lowercase 'urban' unless proper noun. Suggest using a verb 'photograph' or 'take pictures of' and avoid filler words.

× and it is, I guess it is very interesting for other people also when you can share on the Instagram or or Telegram stories and you can get many likes, comments.

✓ and I think it's very interesting for other people when you share on Instagram or Telegram stories; you can get many likes and comments.

Remove redundant 'it is, I guess it is'. Use contraction 'it's' or 'it is'. Use 'share on Instagram or Telegram stories' (no 'the'). Use 'many likes and comments' and correct conjunction placement. Suggest simplifying clauses and avoiding repeated words.

× In today's life, I prefer my own country views because I don't have money to go to another country to taking a picture.

✓ These days, I prefer views in my own country because I don't have money to go to another country to take pictures.

Tense and verb form errors: 'to taking a picture' should be 'to take pictures'. 'In today's life' is awkward; use 'These days'. Match plural 'pictures' for general repeated actions. Keep present simple for preferences.

× That's why I try to take a picture on my own country views actually my neighborhood or my own house or my garden it is very.

✓ That's why I try to take pictures of views in my own country, for example my neighborhood, my house, or my garden.

Original is fragmented and ends with 'it is very' incomplete. Use 'take pictures of views in my own country' and list examples with commas. Remove the unfinished clause. Suggest completing thoughts and using correct preposition 'of' for 'take pictures of'.