Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, lựa chọn từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; rút gọn ý chính và thêm một hai chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: sửa lỗi thì (am/like/prefer), danh từ/ động từ (appreciate → appreciative? recover → preserve), và loại bỏ cụm không cần thiết.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I'm someone who appreciates life's moments and likes to preserve them through photographs. For example, I often take pictures during family gatherings or when I travel so I can remember those occasions clearly.

Sugestão: Cần hoàn chỉnh câu và kết nối các mệnh đề bằng liên từ để câu rõ ràng; bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và tránh câu rời rạc. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như chủ ngữ-động từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (e.g., "I enjoy" chứ không phải chỉ một cụm từ).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and refreshing than city scenes. I especially enjoy simple sights like open fields and small villages, and I often go for walks or bike rides to soak up the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ý và ngữ pháp cơ bản để tránh câu lặp, mâu thuẫn và từ sai nghĩa ("worst experience" không phù hợp khi muốn nói trải nghiệm tốt; "in there" dư thừa). Trình bày rõ lý do tại sao thích cảnh ở nước ngoài và đưa một ví dụ cụ thể về trải nghiệm hoặc kỷ niệm quý giá.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer new and unfamiliar landscapes that fascinate me. For instance, seeing a historic old town or a coastal vista abroad can create lasting memories and inspire me to learn about different cultures.

× I think that I am a person who is appreciate all the moments of my life and want to recover it as much as possible.

✓ I think that I am a person who appreciates all the moments of my life and wants to preserve them as much as possible.

Use of verbs after relative clause: 'who appreciate' is incorrect because subject 'who' refers to 'I' (third person singular) so verb must be 'appreciates'. Also 'want' should agree with 'I' within the relative clause structure, so 'wants'. 'Recover it' is unnatural here; use 'preserve them' to refer to 'moments' (plural). Suggestions: use subject-verb agreement for clauses and choose verbs that match meaning (preserve rather than recover).

× So I'm person who is preferred taking pictures of any different views in my life.

✓ So I'm a person who prefers taking pictures of different views in my life.

Incorrect adjective/adverb and verb forms: 'I'm person' misses the article 'a'. 'Who is preferred taking' is wrong: 'preferred' is passive/incorrect form; use active verb 'prefers' (third person singular). 'Any different views' is wordy; 'different views' suffices. Suggestions: include articles where needed and use active verb forms that agree with the subject; simplify redundant modifiers.

× I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and refreshing than city scenes.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and refreshing than city scenes.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep comparative structure 'more ... than'. Note: you could say 'than those of the city' for clarity, but current form is acceptable.

× Enjoy simple everyday scenes like urban fields and small villages.

✓ I enjoy simple everyday scenes like urban fields and small villages.

Missing subject and verb: the original is a fragment starting with a verb 'Enjoy' without subject. Add 'I' to form a complete sentence. Suggestions: ensure each sentence has an explicit subject and verb unless an imperative is intended.

× Any kind of relaxed by going for a walk or a bike ride, that would be interesting.

✓ Any kind of relaxation, such as going for a walk or a bike ride, would be interesting.

Original has incorrect structure and word choice: 'Any kind of relaxed' uses adjective instead of noun; 'that would be interesting' is awkward. Use noun 'relaxation' and restructure with 'such as' to introduce examples. Also remove comma splice. Suggestions: choose correct noun/adjective forms and use clear connectors.

× I enjoy views in different countries because I think the views in there will be a will be new and also unfamiliar to me and also interesting can bring me a lot of worst experience and there'll be a precious memories.

✓ I enjoy views in different countries because I think the views there will be new and unfamiliar to me and also interesting; they can bring me many valuable experiences and precious memories.

Multiple errors: 'the views in there' uses unnecessary article and wrong preposition — use 'views there'. Duplicate phrase 'will be a will be' removed. 'Also interesting can bring me a lot of worst experience' is ungrammatical: use subject 'they' and verb 'can bring', 'a lot of worst experience' is wrong — use 'many valuable experiences' or 'many great experiences'. 'There'll be a precious memories' mixes contractions and plural noun — use 'precious memories'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, avoid repetition, ensure subject-verb structure is clear, use correct quantifiers and adjective order (valuable experiences, precious memories).

× I think that I am a person who is appreciate all the moments of my life and want to recover it as much as possible.

✓ I think that I am a person who appreciates all the moments of my life and wants to preserve them as much as possible.

The verb after 'who' must agree with its antecedent. 'Who' refers to 'person' (third person singular), so use 'appreciates' and 'wants' not 'appreciate' and 'want'. Also 'preserve them' correctly refers to plural 'moments'. Suggestions: ensure verbs in relative clauses agree with the noun they modify.

× So I'm person who is preferred taking pictures of any different views in my life.

✓ So I'm a person who prefers taking pictures of different views in my life.

'Who' refers back to 'person' (third person singular), so the verb should be 'prefers'. 'Is preferred taking' incorrectly uses passive/participle. Also include the article 'a'. Suggestions: match verb form to the subject and avoid passive forms when active is intended.