Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, use correct tense and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar (e.g., "it helps me relax"), avoid repeated words like "over over" and awkward phrases such as "warm views in my mind."

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Taking photos of different views helps me relax and preserves beautiful memories. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets because the colours calm me and I can look back at the images when I need to unwind.

Sugestão: Answer directly and fix grammar and repetition. Use linking words to explain why and give a specific example. Replace vague phrases with concrete details (e.g., "modern architecture, city lights, rooftop views").

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because modern architecture and city lights are very inspiring. For example, I enjoy photographing skyscrapers and illuminated bridges at night because their shapes and reflections create dramatic images.

Sugestão: Be specific and avoid repeating yourself. Use a topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two concrete reasons and an example. Fix small grammar issues (say "my own country" not "using") and remove duplicate words like "I I."

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has diverse landscapes I haven't explored yet. For instance, I want to visit Ha Giang's mountain roads and Ha Long Bay to photograph the dramatic karst formations before travelling abroad.

× Yes definitely because when I take pictures in many views I will see many magnificent and beautiful views and it's helped me relax and help me have over over warm views in my mind.

✓ Yes, definitely, because when I take pictures of many scenes I see many magnificent and beautiful views, and it helps me relax and gives me warm memories.

The original mixes tenses and has word choice problems. 'When I take' is simple present and should be followed by simple present 'I see' (not 'I will see') for habitual actions. 'In many views' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'of many scenes' or 'of many views'. 'It's helped me relax' uses present perfect incorrectly with 'it' referring to a habitual action; use simple present 'it helps me relax'. 'Help me have over over warm views in my mind' is ungrammatical and unclear; revise to 'gives me warm memories'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habits, use correct prepositions ('of'), and choose clear nouns ('scenes', 'memories').

× What actually I prefer urban areas because it's look more modern and modern and there are many spectacular views for people to visit and that pictures help me imagine.

✓ Actually, I prefer urban areas because they look more modern, and there are many spectacular sights for people to visit, and those pictures help me imagine.

Pronoun agreement and reference errors: 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'urban areas' (subject-verb agreement linked to pronoun). 'It's look' mixes contraction and verb form; use 'they look'. 'That pictures' is wrong; use 'those pictures' for plural demonstrative pronoun. Also 'views' is acceptable but 'sights' is more natural here. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use correct demonstratives ('those' for plural).

× I prefer using my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful and spectacular views that I have never seen and I really want to travel all around Vietnam and I I also want to go around the world because I really love traveling.

✓ I prefer my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful and spectacular places I have never seen, and I really want to travel all around Vietnam; I also want to travel around the world because I really love traveling.

Redundancy and slight tense/verb form issues: 'prefer using my own country' is unnatural—use 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer to travel in my own country'. 'Views that I have never seen' is awkward; 'places I have never seen' is clearer. Repetition 'I I' must be corrected. Maintain present tense for preferences and present perfect for experiences not yet had ('have never seen'). Suggestion: use natural collocations ('prefer my own country', 'places') and remove duplicate words.