Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural, relevant and well-structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, remove filler sounds (like “uh”), keep sentences concise (max 5), and add one specific brief example to make details more vivid (e.g., mention a particular place or event). Also vary vocabulary slightly (use “portraits” and “candid shots” or “landscapes”) to show range.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of beautiful scenery because photographs preserve memories more vividly than writing. For example, when I visited the seaside last summer I took landscape shots at sunset and candid portraits of my family celebrating a birthday, which remind me of the atmosphere and emotions from that day.

Sugestão: Good structure and contrast. Improve by correcting the odd word choice (“research” is inappropriate) and tightening language—use linking words like “however” or “whereas” for clarity. Keep within five sentences and add a specific example of a city or countryside scene to show concreteness. Also replace general nouns with stronger vocabulary (e.g., “tranquil countryside” instead of just “rural areas”).

Exemplo: It depends on my mood and the time of day. At night I prefer urban areas because the glowing city lights and lively streets energize me; whereas during the day I enjoy the tranquil countryside for its fresh air, rolling hills and quiet trails that help me relax.

Sugestão: Clear and concise answer with a direct opinion. To improve, give a brief reason why foreign scenery appeals beyond social media—perhaps cultural variety, different landscapes, or unique architecture—and add a short concrete example of a foreign place you liked. This will make your response more specific and engaging.

Exemplo: Both have their own charms, but I prefer scenery in other countries because I love discovering diverse landscapes and architectures. For instance, I enjoyed photographing the colorful streets and historic buildings in Lisbon last year, which looked great in my travel album and on social media.

× On the other hand, during the day, I prefer rural areas for the peaceful atmosphere, fresh air and natural landscapes, which help me relax and research.

✓ On the other hand, during the day, I prefer rural areas for the peaceful atmosphere, fresh air and natural landscapes, which help me relax and recharge.

The original sentence uses 'research' which is a noun or verb meaning 'to investigate' and does not fit the intended meaning. The speaker likely meant 'recharge' (to recover energy) or 'rest'. This is a word choice error rather than one of the numbered categories; it most closely aligns with incorrect use of a verb in context. Suggest replacing 'research' with 'recharge' or 'rest' to convey relaxation. Also keep present-tense plural agreement 'help me' as correct.

× I think that both have their own unique beauties, but for me, I prefer the scenery in foreign countries because I enjoy traveling around and also sharing photos of famous places on my social media.

✓ I think both have their own unique beauty, but I prefer the scenery of foreign countries because I enjoy traveling and sharing photos of famous places on my social media.

'Both have their own unique beauties' is understandable but 'beauty' as an uncountable noun is more natural here. 'For me' is redundant with 'I prefer'; removing it tightens the sentence. 'Traveling around' is wordy; 'traveling' suffices. These are style and article/noun-choice issues (fits category 22 Article errors / 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns). Suggestions: use 'beauty' for general qualities and simplify redundant phrases.