Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), use correct verb forms and countable/uncountable noun forms, and add one specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, last month I photographed a sunset at the lakeside, which highlighted the changing colors and reflections. I especially enjoy natural scenery because it feels calming and unique.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two clear supporting reasons with correct vocabulary. Replace unclear phrases ("take off photos", "so landscape") and use linking words like "because" or "so". Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in rural areas because the landscapes are more varied and peaceful. For example, forests and rolling hills offer interesting textures and natural light that are harder to find in the city.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct tense and prepositions. Mention a brief reason and a specific example with correct place name usage. Avoid repetition and keep it within 3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer seeing views in my own country because I know the culture and can discover hidden spots. For example, last weekend I visited Pokhara with friends and was captivated by its lakes and mountain scenery. I enjoy exploring local landscapes more than traveling abroad.

× Absolutely, I genuinely like to take pictures of different views, it helps to me capture a memorable things and uh, I enjoyed a lot to capture natural beauty or many other things.

✓ Absolutely, I genuinely like taking pictures of different views; it helps me capture memorable things, and I really enjoy capturing natural beauty and many other things.

Errors: 'like to take' is acceptable but parallel with '-ing' is more natural; 'it helps to me capture' incorrectly uses 'to' and object pronoun order — correct is 'helps me capture' (verb + object + base). 'a memorable things' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove article or use singular noun. 'I enjoyed a lot to capture' uses incorrect verb form and tense; present habitual preference requires present tense 'I really enjoy capturing'. Suggestion: use gerund forms for activities ('taking', 'capturing'), remove unnecessary 'to', match number between articles and nouns, and maintain consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× To be honest, I prefer to take off photos in rural areas because this kind of area is so landscape and the beauty of forest.

✓ To be honest, I prefer taking photos in rural areas because these kinds of areas have beautiful landscapes and forests.

Errors: 'take off photos' is incorrect collocation — use 'take' or 'take photos' or 'take pictures'; 'this kind of area is so landscape' misuses 'landscape' (noun) and 'so' — need adjective phrase 'have beautiful landscapes'; 'the beauty of forest' needs article and pluralization: 'forests' or 'the beauty of the forest'. Suggestion: use 'taking photos', match noun number with demonstrative ('these kinds of areas' or 'this kind of area has a beautiful landscape'), and use appropriate adjective 'beautiful' with plural nouns when general.

× I prefer to visit my own country of different locations.

✓ I prefer to visit different locations in my own country.

Errors: word order and preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'my own country of different locations' misplaces noun phrases. Suggestion: place modifier 'different locations' after prepositional phrase 'in my own country' or use 'visit different locations in my own country' for correct noun phrase order.

× Just last weekend I visited A Pokhara with my friends which captivates me with their natural landscape.

✓ Just last weekend I visited Pokhara with my friends, which captivated me with its natural landscape.

Errors: 'which captivates me' mixes past time reference with present tense; because the visit was last weekend, use past tense 'captivated'. 'A Pokhara' incorrectly uses article 'A' before a proper noun; use 'Pokhara'. Pronoun agreement: 'their natural landscape' refers to a singular place, so use 'its natural landscape'. Suggestion: align tense to past for past events, remove incorrect articles before proper nouns, and match pronoun number to nouns.

× So I genuinely like to visit my own country rather than other countries.

✓ So I genuinely prefer visiting places in my own country rather than going to other countries.

Errors: 'like to visit my own country' is understandable but slightly unnatural after previous sentence; use 'prefer' to match contrast 'rather than'. Also clarify 'visit my own country' to 'visit places in my own country' for parallelism with 'other countries'. Suggestion: use 'prefer visiting' and keep verb forms parallel (prefer X rather than Y) and maintain present simple for general preferences.