Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and support with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences and ensure clarity (avoid phrases like “that's a good question taking” and repeated words).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially natural scenery. For example, I often photograph rivers and forests because they calm me and remind me of how beautiful the environment is. In addition, nature photos help me reflect on environmental problems and inspire me to act.

Sugestão: Clarify and be consistent: if you prefer urban views, explain why with specific urban features (e.g., skyline, parks). Avoid contradictions (you mention forests and greenery as if rural). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example', and reduce fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities combine architectural sights with well-designed parks. For example, I like city rooftops that overlook rivers and tree-lined boulevards, which provide both dramatic skylines and peaceful green spaces. This mix makes urban views interesting and relaxing.

Sugestão: Be direct and give a clear reason why you prefer foreign views; avoid repetition and unfinished sentences. Provide a specific example of a foreign view you liked and use linking words (e.g., 'for instance', 'therefore'). Keep it coherent and under five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I once visited a coastal town abroad where the cliffs and blue sea were unlike anything at home, which broadened my perspective. Therefore, travelling helps me see new scenery and learn about different environments.

× That's a good question taking.

✓ That's a good question.

The original sentence includes an unnecessary gerund 'taking' that makes the sentence ungrammatical and unclear. Remove the extraneous word to form a correct, complete sentence. Suggestion: keep it simple and say 'That's a good question.'

× Nature gives me a different perspective of life, that of of the world that we live in that suffers from pollution as well as it just changes my mood and gives me a hope for life.

✓ Nature gives me a different perspective on life and on the world we live in, which suffers from pollution; it also changes my mood and gives me hope.

Problems: repeated word 'of of'; awkward and incorrect pronoun and clause use ('that of of the world that we live in that suffers...'); unnecessary article 'a hope'. Corrections: use 'perspective on' (correct preposition), remove duplicate words, change 'that suffers' to a clause introduced by 'which' to refer to 'the world', and use 'gives me hope' (no article). Suggestions: simplify complex ideas into clearer clauses and check pronoun references and prepositions.

× I prefer views in urban areas, uh, because it has warm greenery.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they have lush greenery.

Problem: pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural 'urban areas'; 'warm greenery' is unnatural collocation. Correction: use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'areas' and use 'lush' or 'green' for natural description. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and choose natural adjective-noun pairs.

× It gives me another, uh, perspective of life other than the world that we live in.

✓ They give me a different perspective on life compared with the world I live in.

Problems: unclear subject (it) and awkward phrasing 'perspective of life other than the world'. Correction: make subject plural 'they' (referring to views) and use 'perspective on life' and 'compared with' or 'different from'. Suggestion: ensure subject matches previous noun and use standard prepositions ('on' for perspective).

× Umm, it's full of landscapes and sunsets and it's filled with forests, which, umm, just gives the time to breathe oxygen.

✓ They are full of landscapes and sunsets and are filled with forests, which simply give time to breathe fresh air.

Problems: pronoun agreement ('it' vs plural 'views'), incorrect phrase 'gives the time to breathe oxygen' (unnatural and slightly incorrect), missing 'fresh' before 'air' for naturalness. Correction: use plural verbs and pronouns and 'give time to breathe fresh air.' Suggestion: match verb number to subject and use natural collocations.

× That's a good question. I prefer views in other countries because visiting other countries countries means looking at different views.

✓ That's a good question. I prefer views in other countries because visiting other countries means seeing different views.

Problems: duplicated word 'countries countries'; 'looking at different views' is acceptable but 'seeing different views' is more natural. Correction: remove duplication and adjust verb for naturalness. Suggestion: proofread to avoid duplication and choose natural verb phrases.

× The views in my country are similar. So looking at other views from other countries or just to change of perspectives because looking at landscapes.

✓ The views in my country are similar, so I like seeing views from other countries to change my perspective and to enjoy different landscapes.

Problems: sentence fragments ('So looking... or just to change of perspectives because looking at landscapes') and incorrect phrase 'change of perspectives'. Correction: create a complete sentence with subject and verb ('I like seeing...') and use 'change my perspective' and 'enjoy different landscapes.' Suggestion: avoid fragments by ensuring each clause has a subject and verb and use correct noun phrases ('change my perspective').