Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Уменьшите количество слов-паразитов (uh, um) и постройте ответ ясно: начальное утвердительное предложение, затем краткая причина и конкретный пример. Следите за грамматикой (множественное число: pictures) и артиклями (Egypt без артикля). Длина ответа должна быть компактной (до 5 предложений).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, on my last family trip to Egypt I took many photos of the pyramids and the streets of Cairo. These pictures remind me of that experience and inspire future trips.

Sugestão: Используйте правильные глаголы и выражения (prefer urban areas, not ‘using’), избегайте разрывов в середине предложения и дайте более конкретные причины. Добавьте связующие слова (for example, because, so) чтобы ответ был логичным и коротким.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because city streets and buildings motivate me and make me think about my future career. For example, seeing skyscrapers and busy workplaces encourages me to concentrate on my studies and set professional goals.

Sugestão: Устраните слова-паразиты и исправьте грамматические ошибки (I like visiting new places; pictures on the Internet inspired me). Дайте более конкретный сравнение между родной страной и зарубежьем и объясните, почему вы предпочитаете один вид. Сформулируйте не более 5 предложений.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different cultures and landscapes. For instance, seeing photos of European cities online inspired me to study architecture and plan trips to see those places in person.

× And for example, in my last, uh, trip with my family in, uh, in the Egypt, I took a lot of picture.

✓ And for example, on my last trip with my family in Egypt, I took a lot of pictures.

The errors are: incorrect article usage with country name and countable noun. 'in the Egypt' is wrong because most country names like 'Egypt' do not take 'the'. Use 'in Egypt'. Use the preposition 'on' for 'on my last trip'. 'a lot of picture' is singular; 'pictures' plural is required. Suggestion: remember that 'trip' normally collocates with 'on' ('on my last trip'), country names generally have no article ('Egypt'), and use plural for countable items when indicating many ('a lot of pictures').

× And for example, in my last, uh, trip with my family in, uh, in the Egypt, I took a lot of picture.

✓ And for example, on my last trip with my family in Egypt, I took a lot of pictures.

The phrase 'a lot of picture' is incorrect because 'picture' is a countable noun and needs to be plural when preceded by 'a lot of'. Use 'pictures'. To improve, identify countable nouns and pluralize them when referring to more than one.

× And for example, in my last, uh, trip with my family in, uh, in the Egypt, I took a lot of picture.

✓ And for example, on my last trip with my family in Egypt, I took a lot of pictures.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'my last trip' — use 'on my last trip'. Also the repeated 'in' before 'the Egypt' is wrong; country names usually use no article and 'in Egypt' is correct. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'on a trip', 'in Egypt'. Use single correct preposition.

× I prefer using urban areas because when I see the streets and buildings of a large city, I. Think about my future life and it helps me more concentrate on my work, for example looking at skyscrapers.

✓ I prefer urban areas because when I see the streets and buildings of a large city, I think about my future life and it helps me concentrate more on my work, for example by looking at skyscrapers.

Problems: unnecessary gerund 'using' after 'prefer' (use direct noun 'urban areas'); stray period in 'I. Think'; word order 'helps me more concentrate' is wrong — adverb 'more' should follow the verb or use 'concentrate more'. Also add preposition 'by' before the gerund phrase 'looking at skyscrapers' to show method. Suggestion: after 'prefer' use noun or verb+ing consistently ('prefer visiting'/'prefer cities'), place adverbs correctly ('concentrate more'), and use 'by' to express means.

× I prefer using urban areas because when I see the streets and buildings of a large city, I. Think about my future life and it helps me more concentrate on my work, for example looking at skyscrapers.

✓ I prefer urban areas because when I see the streets and buildings of a large city, I think about my future life and it helps me concentrate more on my work, for example by looking at skyscrapers.

The gerund 'using' after 'prefer' is unnecessary and unnatural here; 'prefer urban areas' is better. Also 'looking at skyscrapers' as a participial phrase needs 'by' to indicate how it helps. Suggestion: use gerunds correctly after verbs that require them, but choose simpler noun phrases when possible.

× I appreciate uh, views in our countries, umm, because I like traveling and I like visit, uh, new places.

✓ I appreciate views in my country because I like traveling and I like to visit new places.

Errors: 'in our countries' sounds odd here; likely intended 'in my country' or 'in our country'. Also after 'like' + verb, use infinitive 'to visit' or gerund 'visiting'; both are acceptable but maintain consistency: 'I like to visit new places' or 'I like visiting new places'. Suggestion: choose the appropriate possessive and use 'to' before infinitive when expressing preference with 'like' + action.

× I appreciate uh, views in our countries, umm, because I like traveling and I like visit, uh, new places.

✓ I appreciate views in my country because I like traveling and I like to visit new places.

Using 'our countries' is unclear and mismatches singular 'country' context earlier in the conversation. 'My country' is clearer and matches a single speaker. Suggestion: use pronouns that match the intended reference (singular/plural) and the speaker's perspective.

× Also, I see the pictures in the Internet and uh, it uh, inspired me, uh, for uh, do work for my future life.

✓ Also, I saw pictures on the internet and they inspired me to work for my future life.

Mixed tenses: 'see' (present) and 'inspired' (past) conflict; use past 'saw' to match 'inspired'. Use 'on the internet' not 'in the Internet'. 'It inspired me for do work' is ungrammatical — use 'inspired me to work' or 'inspired me to do work'. Use plural 'they' to refer to 'pictures'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, use correct preposition 'on the internet', and use 'inspire someone to do something' construction.

× Also, I see the pictures in the Internet and uh, it uh, inspired me, uh, for uh, do work for my future life.

✓ Also, I saw pictures on the internet and they inspired me to work for my future life.

Use 'on the internet' not 'in the Internet'. Use 'inspired me to' + verb (infinitive) rather than 'inspired me for do'. Suggestion: memorize common prepositions with nouns like 'on the internet' and remember 'inspire someone to do something' pattern.