Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và mạch câu: sửa lỗi thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'when I have free time' thay vì 'the free time'), loại bỏ từ thừa ('the these'), và dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng (không quá 5 câu). Thêm liên từ hợp lý khi mở rộng lý do (e.g., 'because' hoặc 'so'). Nên bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp để tăng điểm nội dung và từ vựng.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. When I have free time, I usually visit popular spots to take pictures because those photos become part of my memories. I especially enjoy photographing sunsets and city skylines because of their colours and atmosphere.

Sugestão: Cải thiện rõ ràng ý chính và dùng liên từ phù hợp: tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và đại từ sai ('both of you' incorrect), nói rõ lập luận (ví dụ: 'I prefer both for different reasons'). Tránh tiếng lộn xộn, giảm tiếng lắp ('Uh') và nối câu mạch lạc, giới thiệu ví dụ cụ thể cho từng loại cảnh để tăng nội dung.

Exemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban scenes interest me because of the architecture and busy streets, while rural areas appeal to me for their peaceful landscapes and natural colours.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, mạch ý và hoàn thiện câu: sửa 'locations is matter' thành 'location matters' hoặc 'the location doesn't matter'. Hoàn thành ý cuối cùng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tính đa dạng, văn hóa, ánh sáng). Tránh câu dở dang và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả khác biệt nếu có.

Exemplo: I don't think the location matters much. Both my country and neighbouring ones have beaches and mountains, so the scenery can be quite similar. What matters more to me is the light and local culture, which can make the same view feel different.

× When I have the free time, I usually go to popular places and taking pictures of these views because the these pictures will become a part of my memories.

✓ When I have free time, I usually go to popular places and take pictures of the views because these pictures become part of my memories.

The error is using the -ing form 'taking' after the coordinated verb 'go' where the base form 'take' is required (parallel structure). Also 'the free time' is incorrect article usage and should be 'free time'. 'The these pictures' has a redundant article. Use simple present 'become' for habitual action rather than 'will become'. Suggestions: use parallel verb forms after 'and' (go ... and take), omit unnecessary articles ('free time' not 'the free time'), remove duplicate articles ('these pictures' not 'the these pictures'), and use simple present for habitual facts.

× I love both because both of you give me a different preference and different emotion.

✓ I love both because they give me different preferences and different feelings.

The phrase 'both of you' incorrectly addresses the listener; 'both' should refer to the two kinds of areas (urban and rural), so use 'they'. 'A different preference' is unnatural; use plural 'different preferences' or singular 'a different feeling'. 'Different emotion' should be 'different feelings' or 'different emotions' for natural collocation. Suggestions: match pronouns to the intended plural noun ('they'), use plural nouns for general statements, and choose collocations ('feelings' rather than 'emotion' alone).

× Uh, I have time. I love urban views and but also there's a time I love area. So yeah, that the same for me.

✓ Sometimes I prefer urban views, but there are also times when I like rural areas. So yeah, it's the same for me.

This contains multiple sentence structure issues: 'I have time' is irrelevant and unclear; 'and but also' is redundant; 'there's a time I love area' is ungrammatical and missing articles and nouns; 'that the same for me' lacks a verb and correct pronoun ('it's the same for me'). Suggestions: combine ideas into clear sentences, use 'sometimes' or 'there are times when' for frequency, include necessary articles ('rural areas'), and use the correct subject-verb ('it's').

× I don't think locations is matter.

✓ I don't think location matters.

'Locations' (plural) with singular verb 'is' is a subject-verb agreement error. Also the structure 'is matter' is incorrect; use 'matter' as a verb: 'location matters' or 'locations matter'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number and use the correct verb form: 'location matters' or 'locations matter'.

× In my country and nearly nearby other countries they have both a beach and mountain so I think the views is the same.

✓ In my country and in nearby countries they have both beaches and mountains, so I think the views are the same.

'Beach and mountain' should be plural when speaking generally about places: 'beaches and mountains'. 'Nearly nearby' is redundant; use 'nearby'. Subject-verb agreement: 'views is' is incorrect; use 'views are'. Also add 'in' before 'nearby countries' for clarity. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, remove redundant words, and match verb number to subject.