Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and varied vocabulary. Avoid repetition and fillers. Add one or two specific examples and a linking phrase to explain why photos matter to you.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes, especially natural landscapes, birds, and lively festivals. For example, I often take photos of migratory birds at the local wetland because their colours and behaviour are fascinating. When I feel bored or nostalgic, I look at these pictures to relive those moments and feel relaxed.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (countable/uncountable, articles) and avoid repeating ideas. Give one concrete example to strengthen your point.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and less noisy. Moreover, there is more open space and cleaner air, which makes outdoor activities like hiking or picnics more enjoyable. For instance, I like visiting a nearby village where I can walk in rice fields and relax away from city traffic.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid fillers (uh). Use correct grammar and sentence structure: subject-verb agreement and articles. Be specific: name particular places or features and explain why you prefer them using linking words. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because Bangladesh has many beautiful natural sites. For example, the Sundarbans mangrove forest and the Cox's Bazar beach offer unique scenery and wildlife. Therefore I enjoy exploring local destinations that reflect my culture and environment.

× Yes, I love taking picture of different views, especially natural sceneries, birds and lovely festival.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery, birds, and lovely festivals.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' and the general activity of photographing multiple views (singular/plural issue). 'Sceneries' is rarely plural in English; use uncountable 'scenery' (singular/plural issue). 'Lovely festival' should be plural 'festivals' if referring to festivals in general (singular/plural issue). Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items or general activities; use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun.

× I love to capture memories and when I feel bore or want to see my past, I see this beautiful picture.

✓ I love to capture memories, and when I feel bored or want to look back on my past, I look at these beautiful pictures.

Errors: 'feel bore' is incorrect; use past participle/adjective 'bored' to describe a feeling (past tense/ adjective form). 'Want to see my past' is awkward; 'look back on my past' is more natural (tense/structure). 'I see this beautiful picture' should be 'I look at these beautiful pictures' to match plural and correct verb collocation. Suggestion: Use 'bored' for the feeling and 'look at/look back on' for reviewing memories; match singular/plural consistently.

× I prefer rural areas because it's a very lovely and peaceful place for people and there is less noise and many open space where people can enjoy their life and can relax.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are very lovely and peaceful places for people; there is less noise and much open space where people can enjoy life and relax.

Errors: 'it's' refers to singular but 'rural areas' is plural; use 'they are' (there be/subject agreement). 'There is less noise' is acceptable, but 'many open space' is incorrect: 'open space' is uncountable so use 'much open space' or plural 'open spaces' (there be/quantifier issue). 'Enjoy their life' should be 'enjoy life' or 'enjoy their lives' for consistency (pronoun/number). Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement for 'there' constructions and match quantifiers to countable/uncountable nouns.

× I prefer views in my own country because, uh, my country, Bangladesh is very beautiful.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country, Bangladesh, is very beautiful.

Errors: Comma placement is punctuation rather than grammar, but sentence is fine; no major grammar error except unnecessary filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Remove fillers and set off the appositive with commas for clarity. (Kept as singular/plural type because surrounding guidance focuses on count/number consistency.)

× Uh, there have many natural destination where tourists and people can enjoy and, uh, hang out there vacation and uh.

✓ There are many natural destinations where tourists and locals can enjoy themselves and hang out on their vacations.

Errors: 'there have' is incorrect; use 'there are' for existence (there be issue). 'Natural destination' should be plural 'natural destinations' (singular/plural). 'People' is vague; 'locals' or 'residents' is clearer. 'Enjoy and hang out there vacation' has pronoun and preposition errors: use 'enjoy themselves' and 'on their vacations' (pronoun/preposition). Suggestion: Use 'there are' with plural noun, make nouns plural when needed, and use reflexive pronoun 'themselves' for people enjoying activities; use 'on their vacations' for the time phrase.