Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and give a slightly fuller but concise response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Use linking words if adding detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing a variety of views because I love photography. For example, I often capture city skylines at sunset to practice composition and light.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference as the topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word to connect your points. Avoid vague phrases like 'I can prefer it' or 'I don't know.'

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural landscapes and quiet environments. For instance, I like photographing rolling hills and lakes since they offer varied textures and calm lighting.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a clear preference, then justify with specific details or examples. Avoid unclear phrasing and repetition. Use linking words (however, although, because) to make comparisons clearer.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the best spots and their seasonal changes. However, I also appreciate foreign scenery; for example, I enjoyed the dramatic coastlines I saw abroad, but I still feel most connected to local landscapes.

× Yes, I like to take pictures of different different views because I love photography.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because I love photography.

The word 'different' is unnecessarily repeated, which is a redundancy and affects fluency. Remove the duplicate to make the sentence concise: 'different views'. (Note: This correction addresses word choice/repetition which fits under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs.)

× I can prefer it, but I don't know about urban areas or rural ones.

✓ I don't really have a preference; I'm not sure whether I prefer urban or rural areas.

The original uses 'I can prefer it' which is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Can' is unnecessary and conflicts with 'prefer'. Rewriting to 'I don't really have a preference' clarifies meaning and uses correct verb structure. Also change 'about urban areas or rural ones' to 'whether I prefer urban or rural areas' for correct comparison structure and clarity.

× Yes, I can prefer views of our own country.

✓ Yes, I prefer the views of my own country.

'Can prefer' is incorrect here; 'prefer' should be used without 'can' to express a general preference. Also use 'the views of my own country' for natural phrasing and consistent first-person reference.

× I visit so many places in my own country, but may I talk in other country?

✓ I have visited many places in my own country, but may I talk about other countries?

Several issues: tense and article use. 'I visit so many places' is awkward for past experience; 'I have visited many places' is more appropriate. 'May I talk in other country?' is ungrammatical: use 'about other countries' with plural and the preposition 'about' instead of 'in'. Also change 'other country' to 'other countries' to match meaning.

× Their views are also good, but our countries views are better than other countries.

✓ Their views are also good, but our country's views are better than those of other countries.

Multiple errors: 'our countries views' needs a possessive apostrophe (our country's views) or 'the views of our country'. 'Better than other countries' lacks a clear comparison object; compare views to 'those of other countries'. Using 'their' and 'our' must clearly refer to countries; rephrasing to 'those of other countries' avoids pronoun confusion.