Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và ý tưởng tốt, nhưng cần cải thiện cấu trúc câu mở đầu (nên trả lời trực tiếp ngay câu chủ đề), tránh một vài lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ (ví dụ: 'pursue memories' không chuẩn). Ngoài ra, giới hạn độ dài xuống tối đa 4-5 câu rõ ràng, và dùng một vài từ nối để mạch lạc hơn (ví dụ: "because", "for example").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture small daily moments and preserve memories. For example, when I walk home I often take photos of city streets and sunsets, which remind me of the atmosphere that day.

Sugestão: Ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'prefer the views of rural area than' sai; thiếu mệnh đề hoàn chỉnh ở cuối câu). Hãy dùng cấu trúc đúng: 'prefer X to Y' và hoàn thành câu mô tả với chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng thêm từ nối (e.g., 'because', 'for instance') và một vài tính từ chính xác để miêu tả.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy wide open fields and peaceful atmospheres. For instance, I love photographing the golden light over rice paddies at sunset, which feels more relaxing than busy city scenes.

Sugestão: Ý chính rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ (ví dụ: 'to other countries' nên 'to those in other countries'; 'land cave' không chính xác; câu thứ hai rời rạc và thiếu cụ thể). Hãy viết một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng từ vựng chính xác (‘caves’, ‘landscapes’, ‘coastlines’).

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country, Vietnam, to those in other countries because its landscapes are incredibly diverse. For example, I have been lucky enough to visit some famous caves and dramatic coastlines, which are unlike anywhere else.

× Says I do.

✓ I do.

The student used 'Says I do' which incorrectly includes 'Says' as a reporting verb in direct speech. Remove 'Says' to use a natural present simple reply: 'I do.' Use just the verb phrase for concise spoken responses.

× I enjoy photographing different views because it's a great way to capture small daily moments and pursue memories.

✓ I enjoy photographing different views because it's a great way to capture small daily moments and preserve memories.

The verb 'pursue' is incorrect in this context; 'preserve' or 'keep' fits meaning of maintaining memories. Use the base verb 'preserve' after 'to' to express purpose. This is a word choice issue related to verb meaning rather than form.

× For example, I often take photos of city streets and sunsets when I walk home, which helps me remember the atmosphere of that day.

✓ For example, I often take photos of city streets and sunsets when I walk home, which helps me remember the atmosphere of the day.

The phrase 'that day' is awkward when speaking generally. Use 'the day' to refer back to each specific day in a habitual context. This is a minor article/pronoun choice to make the sentence natural in present habitual narration.

× I will say I prefer the views of rural area than the urban areas.

✓ I would say I prefer the views of rural areas to urban areas.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally and the preposition 'to' after 'prefer' (prefer A to B). Also 'would' is more natural for polite opinion. 'The' is unnecessary here.

× I am really into the views of the enormous fields or the tranquil atmospheres of.

✓ I am really into views of enormous fields and tranquil atmospheres.

Remove unnecessary definite articles and complete the sentence: 'the tranquil atmospheres of' is incomplete. Use plural nouns and 'and' to join items. Also avoid ending with a preposition; provide full noun phrases.

× I would say that I do prefer views in my country Vietnam to other countries.

✓ I would say that I prefer views in my country, Vietnam, to those in other countries.

When comparing, use 'prefer A to B' and make the contrast clear by saying 'those in other countries.' Adding commas around 'Vietnam' clarifies apposition. 'Do prefer' is unnecessary emphasis here.

× As to my note, Vietnam is famous for its stunning land cave and I am lucky to visit some area.

✓ As a note, Vietnam is famous for its stunning caves and I have been lucky enough to visit some areas.

'Land cave' is unnatural; use 'caves' (plural) for general fame. 'Some area' should be 'some areas' or 'certain areas.' Use present perfect 'have been' to indicate experience up to now and 'lucky enough' to express fortunate experience.