Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid vague or awkward phrases (e.g., “just making that the scenery”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture memories of places I visit. For example, I often take landscape shots when I travel so I can remember the light and atmosphere of each location.

Sugestão: Be clearer and use correct collocations. Give one or two specific reasons and use linking words (because, for example, and). Avoid unclear phrases like “be aware.”

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities have diverse architecture and busy streets that tell stories. For example, I like photographing markets and street scenes since they show daily life and interesting contrasts.

Sugestão: Correct word choice and streamline sentences. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific reason and one brief example. Fix grammar (use “from my own country,” “it is a pleasure,” “those areas,” “those scenes”).

Exemplo: I prefer views from my own country because they carry personal memories and familiar details. For instance, I often photograph coastal towns where I grew up to preserve the light and colors that remind me of my childhood.

× I think it's a way to create memories, just making that the scenery.

✓ I think it's a way to create memories by capturing the scenery.

Original sentence uses 'making that the scenery' which is ungrammatical and unclear. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Replace with 'by capturing the scenery' to show the means of creating memories and use a correct verb phrase. Suggestion: use 'by' + gerund to express how you create memories and choose a clear verb like 'capture' or 'photograph'.

× I think they are much more interesting because they have a lot of things going on in around the corner, so I would love to be aware.

✓ I think they are much more interesting because there are a lot of things happening around every corner, so I would love to be aware of them.

Original sentence has incorrect preposition combination 'in around the corner' and awkward verbs 'have a lot of things going on' followed by 'be aware' without object. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and sentence structure (ID 26). Use 'happening around every corner' and add 'of them' after 'aware' to complete the thought. Suggestion: use 'happen' for events, 'around every corner' for locations, and 'aware of' when indicating awareness of something.

× I definitely prefer using my own country.

✓ I definitely prefer my own country.

Using 'using' is incorrect here; preference verbs are followed by a noun or gerund depending on meaning. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and article use nuance (ID 22). Say 'I prefer my own country' to indicate preference of location. If you meant 'taking photos in', say 'I definitely prefer taking photos in my own country.' Suggestion: after 'prefer' use a noun phrase or 'prefer to' + verb; choose the form that matches intended meaning.

× That for me is a completely pleasure to put attention in that areas and just capture the beauty of that scenes.

✓ For me, it is a complete pleasure to pay attention to those areas and just capture the beauty of those scenes.

Multiple errors: incorrect article 'a completely pleasure' (should be 'a complete pleasure' or 'complete pleasure'), wrong preposition 'put attention in', wrong demonstratives 'that areas' and 'that scenes', and plural agreement. These are article errors (ID 22), preposition errors (ID 11), and singular/plural/demonstrative usage issues (ID 1/12). Use 'pay attention to' for the correct verb + preposition, 'those areas' and 'those scenes' for plural demonstratives, and 'complete' as adjective before 'pleasure.' Suggestion: use 'For me, it is a complete pleasure to pay attention to those areas and capture the beauty of those scenes.'